Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/11/07 4:06
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

Leave it to Dumbledore! Ha ha, he is awesome. Was James tense about Remus' cold, or, at this point, did he think Remus a traitor? I love the thought of Remus as a snow globe; it gives me a reason to stare at him. *drools* lol, just kidding. That was clever of you. Your writing style is great. You had awesome details. It's really believable. Great job! :D

~~Lluvia~~


Author's Response: Ah, yes, just what exactly was James' problem? Almost makes you wonder if the author will try to write the same story from somebody else's point of view some day...

Reviewer: blacsilver_serpent
Date: 01/18/07 3:56
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

Was it suspicion that Remus was a servant of the Dark Lord that James had in him towards Remus? Aww, poor Remus. A light, nice Christmas story to read. I especially liked this part:

“All right. But this had better be worthwhile, Sirius. I’m not in the mood for...”

“...passing along germs, yes, I know it, for the twenty-third time.” Sirius whipped his wand out of his sleeve. “Let me think.”

“Please do. That’s my head you’re aiming at.”

Rather hilarious.I also loved Dumbledore's presence here. Nicely written.


Author's Response: Well, thank you! Yeah, I think I should do a little more with this theme. It's kind of interesting.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 01/14/07 16:08
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

is it ok that im confused?
what was up with the tenseness?
seems like a nice happy little christmas story, but is it?
Well written for what i think it is, well done
Oh and since when did a "dog" flirt with a cat lol

Author's Response: It's okay that you're confused. I'm thinking that I should write this same story from Sirius's point of view. And hey, Sirius was friends with Crookshanks. He likes cats. Dogs who grow up around cats accept them as part of the "will not catch and kill but will be nice to" kind of folks.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 01/05/07 23:35
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

HI there again!
I couldn't resist another comment or two. :)
ProfPosky wondered:
Is James suspecting Lupin? Was the ornament destroyed with the house, or might it yet turn up somewhere?
I wondered about the James as well! I didn't catch it the first time I read the story though, because it's rather subtle. I thought James was upset because of Lupin's cold! I almost PMed you about it, lol. But reading it again I started to wonder. Sirius tells Lupin in PoA that he assumed Lupin was the spy. Is this the beginning of that suspicion in this story? If so, it's brilliant! If not, just nod and say it is. ;) I also noticed that Peter was absent, visiting family - was that deliberate as well? Because it sets him up for suspicion also and is well done.

As for the ornament - it's a lovely touch, and you certainly could use it in other stories! Wouldn't that be neat if Harry found something special when he goes to Godric's Hollow in book seven!
Again, a lovely job - thanks!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hmm! How much do you want me to reveal? I'm thinking of touching on this subject in another story. Yeah, I think I will.

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 01/05/07 23:15
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

I saw you in that fic! I saw you!

Is James suspecting Lupin? Was the ornament destroyed with the house, or might it yet turn up somewhere?

And to think that after all these years I have only FIVE plates of My china...

Well, I wonder a bit where some of it is coming from, but I'll bet gmariam doesn't, and it is her gift fic, so that's nothing to complain about, and - I like it. I like Remus being a snow globe. Not everyone would enjoy that.

(Pictures Percy as a snow globe. Hopes and Prays someone tries it on him some day. Hopes it is one of those snow globes with little OBJECTS mixed in with the snow...)

Author's Response: (Pictures Percy as a snow globe, too, just for the fun of it, with spiky little silver things stuck in his hair, making his eyes water, poking up his nose...heh-heh-heh...) Why is it that everything I write seems to have a back-story? Because it does, you know. (sigh...)

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 01/05/07 16:08
Chapter: Charming Bubblehead Christmas

Thank you thank you thank you! You know I love it, I think you did a wonderful job! I was worried that my prompt might be too specific, but you wrote exactly what I asked for and it's lovely.

First of all, I laughed because I had a cold for Christmas and was still sniffling and sneezing when I received the story. It was perfect - if only I had had a bubblehead charm myself. ;)

Second of all, I love your sense of humor. My favorite lines had to be:
Sirius whipped his wand out of his sleeve. “Let me think.”
“Please do. That’s my head you’re aiming at.”

That is so funny!
And then for Dumbledore to come in and turn Remus into a snowglobe - that is just such a funny picture! I would love to see that!

Third of all, I know you like cats and Harold/Haroldine was a lovely feline addition to the story. I'm a cat person myself, as opposed to a dog person. Very cute.

I really appreciate all the time and effort you put into this story, it was a lovely gift. Thank you so much, and good luck with your future writing!
~Gina :)


Author's Response: You're very welcome! I'm really glad you liked it. Remus's cold had to be part of the story. I had a cold, too, wouldn't you just know!

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