Reviews For To Walk a Mile
Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 13:31
Chapter: Bravery, Lavender Brown

Those were all neat stories. I'll definitely be looking for more.

Author's Response: thanks very much:)

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 08/29/07 21:51
Chapter: A Crown of Daisies, Luna Lovegood

Briilant! I love Luna lovegood! She's my absolute favorite charcater!!!

Author's Response: I adore Luna too. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 08/28/07 11:54
Chapter: A Crown of Daisies, Luna Lovegood

You could just change it to her being 9, why not?

Author's Response: I think that if she was nine her response to death would be a bit different.

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 08/28/07 11:41
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

That was pretty creepy at the end. Good job

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 08/28/07 11:12
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

Wow I really really like this chapter!!! I love how you write in present-tense, that's difficult to pull off but you did really well!!!!

Author's Response: I've never written present tense before, I had to keep correcting my 'was' and my 'were's. Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: beachbum
Date: 08/28/07 11:02
Chapter: A Little Bit of Both, Eloise Midgeon

aw that was actually really beautifully written =) , can't wait till the next chapter my lovely x

Author's Response: Aw, thanks a bunch:)

Reviewer: The Ghoul In The Attic
Date: 08/09/07 9:50
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

Vey nice! I like!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ravencorgi
Date: 07/29/07 22:01
Chapter: The Great Unable-to-Skate Nancy, James Potter

^_^ It's so cute! These are all really great! Please write more?

Author's Response: Thanks, and will do!

Reviewer: invisible sanctuary
Date: 02/11/07 0:04
Chapter: A Crown of Daisies, Luna Lovegood

I love the bookend-y endings! It was a very punch-in-the-gut type feeling. I like your Goyle very much. I can easily imagine him having all these private mini-rebellions against Draco (preferring Daphne over Pansy, pointing out that at lunchtime he was supposed to be at the Great Hall, etc.) It's a bit sad how he kind of molds back into Crabbe-and-Goyle at the end and it shows how he falls back into his pattern rather than making a choice. This vignette was incredibly effective IMO. The second one is also well-done, but Luna almost seems a bit too mature. I can picture her saying the majority of the dialouge in the books. This may just be because of Luna's character in the books seems very childish, but you have to remember that her mother's death did have a huge effect on her. She's old enough for the death of her mother to "sink in" (in JKR's words). It is still a very appropriate response for her directly following her mother's death. I think you did an amazing job with these two characters and I look forward to reading the next one!
-invisible sanctuary
Knight of the Turnip Table

Author's Response: I made Luna six in that because I had started writing that a very loong time ago (one day when I was sick in bed and unable to check the Lexicon) so I didn't know off the top of my head her age, so I made her 6.I just decided to keep her that way I guess. Thank you very much for the lovely review:)

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 01/04/07 21:41
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

Wow, you've done it again!!
I love how you write : )


ps too bad about not making the mods...next time, right?

Author's Response: Aw, thanks sunshine:) Yeah, it's too bad, but there's always next time.

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 01/03/07 19:50
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

Very enjoyable. I liked how, so easily, you switched from humorous to serious in this chapter. I'm interested to see where you go with this! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 01/03/07 15:35
Chapter: Choices, Gregory Goyle

That was really interesting. Crabe and Goyle fascinate me. ;D

Author's Response: Thanks:)

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