beautiful story. please keep it up. :)
beautiful story. please keep it up. :)
For the whole story so far...Bravo.
Your story is really nice i hope the next chapter will be up soon!!!!
OMG!! That was phenomonal!! Keep writing, and get the next one out fast!!
aawww...that's such a great ending...this is a great fanfiction!!! update fast!!!
Author's Response: i've submitted the next chapter :]
Wow awesome! But Why Why Why did you have to end it in a cliffhanger?????
Awesome, awesome! can't wait for chapter seven to be readable! Love love love this fanfic. You are doing an excellent job!
Awesome, awesome! can't wait for chapter seven to be readable! Love love love this fanfic. You are doing an excellent job!
That was so Deep!!!!!!!
your a fab writer
NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! i hate cliff hangers.
Don’t look at me like that,” Ginny said, the tears slowly leaving her eyes.
“Ginny…” Harry stared at her, not knowing what to say.
But before his words could find him, she glanced at him one last time, before running into the house and out of sight.
“Bloody hell,” Harry said
I love that part is reminds me of what always seems to happen in life.
I never quite figured out how JK could have missed out expanding the wedding into something more. A wedding provides a naturally romantic setting, but JK simply didn't spend enough time expanding Harry's relationship w/Ginny. You would think that if Harry loved Ginny so much that her kiss is what he thought about before he gave up his life, that he would have spend considerable time soul searching his decision to protect her. Your story is wonderfully written, and blends with the story very nicely (I wish it was included into the book actually). Your style is much like JK's in that you paint a very clear picture. I wonder if Harry was as self-conscious as you make him out to be at some parts, he normally doesn't hesitate to say what's on his mind, but it does add a dramatic effect. I await the next installment.
The ending is great...but I still want more!!! Just like th ending to HP7
hahah i just read this story in one night and it rocks. its like the bomb its like awesomely exploding with its bomb like qualitys!!! haha i know i seem crazy well i am and im sleep deprived but please update soon your like my hero! hehe! MORE~
Hurry up and write the next chapters, cos I'm dying to read them!!!
