Okay not a bad chapter, though very confusing. Guess I need to wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Meh. I was sort of afraid of that. I hope it wasn't entirely too confusing. Everything will get explained, though. Thanks for the review! :-)
Teehee.I love your writing! I've done nothing but laugh. Anyway, I hope you update soon! 'cause this is real gud!
Author's Response: You love my writing? Thanks sooo much! I'm very happy to hear that my story has made you laugh! I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for the wonderful review! :-)
aww james is so sweet
Author's Response: Isn't he?... Yes, he is. ;-) Thanks for the review!
I like this story.. It's not too fluffy, and thats great! Besides, we all now that Lily's parents have to die before she does, elseway Harry would have had his grandparents to live with. And, naturally, it is great to kill them off in their seventh year for the people who write fanfiction.. so I for one totally understand..
Great work! update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm also glad you don't think it's too fluffy. To much fluff is too, uh, fluffy. Yeah, I know it's kind of a common thing to kill of Lily's parents, especially in seventh year. Although, I only killed of her mum! *insert nervous laugh* Well, I'm very glad you like it, and I'll try to update soon!
As soon as Dumbledore called her away I knew what was up... Lily's parents *always* get killed in James/Lily fanfics :P It is still a good story though :)
Author's Response: Yeah... but I have a reason! And besides, I'm a *little* different... I only killed her mum! (Please take no notice of the lame attempt to be different) I'm glad that you still like it though!
See that is just typical writer-reader hatred right there! I loved everything about this chapter. I mean, really loved it. Does Lily's dad die? Why did you kill her mom? Are James and Lily together now? These are the questions that haunt me.
Author's Response: He, he, he. You loved it? You really loved it? Thank you soooo much! Sorry, those haunting questions will be, uh, haunting you until the next chapter. *smiles brightly and ducks! :-) Thanks for the wonderful review!
I really like this story. It's so sweet. Could you please not make us wait for a long time? please? ^.^
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! I promise, I'll try to update as soon as I can!
Great job! I still hope we will understand more about why Seth cursed Lily etc.
Will we see a return of her old friends perhaps sometime soon?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I have a lot of explaining to do in the Seth department... And yes, you'll see Lily's friends very soon! Thanks for the review!
C'mon! You make us wait for days, and then you give us this awesome, amazing, FANTASTIC chapter, and you just... drop it there? How so unfair!!!
Author's Response: You thought it was awesome, amazing, and fantastic? Wow! Ah, but now you're making me feel bad for making you wait and then just ending the chapter. But really, the wait was only a few days over the week - I'm not doing too bad, am I? Hmm... Well, I promise I'll try to update really soon! Thanks you very much for another lovely review! :-)
So here I am, finished reviewing, getting ready to click 'next' and guess what? No next. NOT HAPPY! Here's you regularly scheduled review:
This story is great! It is so sweet! Makes me want to cry!
Sorry! I'll try to update soon!
And I have to say, I'm diggin' the regularly scheduled review.
that is soooo sad, i cried. you are a very talented writer and i wish i was as good, please keep going, i love this story!
Author's Response: Ah, I'm sorry I made you cry! But I'm not sorry about the rest of your review... Thanks so much, those are such wonderful compliments! I promise I'll keep adding to the story, and I'm so glad that you like it!
Such a cliffie.... Will I be able to live through it all?
Author's Response: I'm horrible, I know. Please don't die, I haven't finished the story! ;-)
I tried that "didn't say that there was or wasn't..." method durring math class and I almost failed
Author's Response: Oops. Yeah, it's not necessarily applicable to daily life... :-)
I used to be a drama queen, so I find it all funny!
Author's Response: I think everyone is a drama queen (or king) at one point during their lives. :-) I'm very glad you find it funny!
*giggling* this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny
Author's Response: He, he, he. Thank you! I try to put a little humor into things... :-)
you made me cry!
i love your story
just keep it happy
from now on
Author's Response: I made you cry? Aah, I'm sorry! I'm not sorry that you love it though. ;-) I can't promise that it will be happy from now on, but things will start looking up soon - for a little while, at least. Thanks for the review! :-)
GREAT STORY! I really like it! I can't wait for the next chapter- hopefully some more background on Selena and Seth? I know that he cursed her but I would love to know why. ooh intrigue...
Author's Response: O'm so glad you like it! Ooh, sorry, not the next chapter. But I promise that you're going to find out quite a bit about Selena and Seth in some chapters to come! Yay for intrigue! And many thanks for the lovely review! :-)
I READ THE HOLE STORIE AND I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Yay for LibertyV! I'm so happy you that you liked it!
I really like this story. For one you put in awesome humor. :O) You wrote this chapter awesomeley (a word???)!!!!!! I can't wait till the next!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You really like it? Thanks so much! I try to put a little humor in to most things, I think it makes it more interesting that way! And for all intensive purposes, awesomely shall forever be known as a word... I'll try to update soon! Thanks for the review! :-)
Hello! Wonderful job.
The only thing I could find in this beginning chapter was a little thing that was very hard to notice and was simply a grammar error. Just make sure that after ending a quote you add a space to begin the new sentence.
I liked the way you described the relationship between Lily and James. You can tell that Lily clearly is not fond of James in the slightest and James is head-over-heels for her and seems to show it in ways that Lily does not approve of.
I also like the way you describe Sirius and James' friendship. You can see that Sirius is completely comfortable with him and doesn't exactly care when James tells him to shut up, but instead laughs even more as he attempts to sweet-talk Lily.
You did a lovely job here. Can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll go check on that little problem you pointed out... I'm glad you liked it, and I'm very glad that you actually took the time to point out what you liked! Thanks very much for the lovely review, and I hope you like the rest of my story! :-)