Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 06/13/07 18:01
Chapter: Transitions

im so confused right now its not even funny.
but this makes me want to keep reading!
just keep it going i like this story alot.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're confused! It will be explained... hopefully. I'm so glad you like it and that you'll keep reading! :-)

Reviewer: aqua_dragon
Date: 06/13/07 1:17
Chapter: Transitions

Hey, (again)
nice chapter, though i still hate cliffehangers, unless i write them of course. This is turning into a really good story, if it was a book i couldn't put it down. Please update soon, even though it's recently updated...
Anyways keep going strong. :)


Author's Response: Hello to you too (again)! I hate reading cliffhangers too... Ah, you really think my story is that good? Thank you *so* much! I'll try to update soon, and thanks so much for you're faithful reviews! :-)

Reviewer: Cedrics love
Date: 06/12/07 18:47
Chapter: Transitions

that was so good..but i'm confused about why lily and james have to go back to their old rooms...especially cause serena is there..

Author's Response: Thanks! I won't say the really major reason, but I will tell you that perhaps a contributing factor to why Dumbledore sends Lily back to her old room is because of the fact that Selena is there... Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Oops. I forgot to say something. One of the (other) reasons Dumbledore sent Lily and James back to their old dorms is because he doesn't want them so isolated from other people. In this story, Voldemort has just had Lily's mum killed, but we haven't yet found out why (or how, specifically). With Voldemort's increasing influence and power, Dumbledore is concerned for all the students. Basically, at the moment, the phrase "safety in numbers" would probably explain Dumbledore's "reasoning" the best. He just doesn't want James and Lily of in a seperate part of the castle. I hope that made some sort of sense...

Reviewer: lebasilisk
Date: 06/12/07 16:43
Chapter: Transitions

ahh! i hope you update soon, this is soo awesome!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 06/12/07 15:19
Chapter: Transitions

Oohhhh..That Was Guudd!!! Dnt Keep Me In Suspensee!!! Keep Writtingg!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 06/12/07 15:07
Chapter: Transitions

AHH! Is something going to happen to Lily! I can't wait for the next chapter! great job! :)

Author's Response: Dun, dun, dun, dun. Please excuse me while I *squee*. My 200th review! And it's a really nice one! Yay!!! :-)

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 06/12/07 12:09
Chapter: Transitions

short but sweet!

Author's Response: Just like you're review! ;-)

Reviewer: DarkPrincess0206
Date: 06/12/07 11:48
Chapter: Transitions

Noo!!!! God darn it! Why'd you have to go all "writer-y" on me. Think of your readers. Your poor poor readers. Sitting and withering away in their chairs waiting for your next update. =(
Okay, maybe I exaggerated a bit. XD

Great update, though I hate the shorness. Is Sirius going to hex James? He is, isn't he?

Author's Response: I like you're exaggerations. They give lovely visuals. And, of course, my humblest apologies for my abuse to my lovely readers. I know this chapter was short, but it was the logical place to stop (for me, at least). Heh. I can't say Sirius is going to hex James, but I can't saw he won't either. It's a lovely idea, either way. :-)

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 06/12/07 9:44
Chapter: Transitions

aaaaargh no too short!! the suspense! who's finally decided to talk to lily? why did dumbledore send them back to their rooms? aaaaaaaaaaargh....

Author's Response: I'm awful, I know. But it was the logical place for the chapter to stop and the next one to start. Aah, I can't answer you're questions - yet. I'm tempted to put tape over my mouth to keep myself from talking, but seeing as I'm typing on the computer... heh. :-)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/12/07 9:02
Chapter: Transitions

love your story, but this chapter was over way to quick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! an outrage, an abomination, an- ignore me please, i just pulled an all nighter! love your story, but put in longer chapters! if you ca that is! love ya! :P

Author's Response: I know, it was really short. It's alright, I've pulled a number of all nighter's, and I'll tell you that my words would be much more... colorful. Heh. I'm so glad you like my story so much! It's true, my chapters are pretty short. But it's either update pretty regularly or make longer chapters, so... :-)

Reviewer: Blacks Girl78
Date: 06/10/07 20:02
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

Updates!!! I need Updates!!!!!! Please, it's amazing!!! Your next story, can it be with Sirius, frankly I love Sirius, and I haven't heard anything (other than Sage) of his "flings" so please!!!I BEG OF YOU!!! FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm going to make some assumptions here and take a gander that you like my story a bit? ;-) Actually, I've been pondering doing something with Sirius - I love him too... I'll split him with you though! Hmm... I might throw in a little more Sirius more often, but since it's a James/Lily fic, I do have to limit that a bit. I'm fully planning on finishing the story, no worries! Thanks for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/07/07 22:06
Chapter: Transitions

FINALLY! CAN'T WAIT TO READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!! :) :D ;) ;D :O :o ;O ;o kool smile things!

Author's Response: He, he, he. Thanks. I like the smilies!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/06/07 16:12
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

This story is so sweet. I hope that the next chapter gets validated soon.

Author's Response: Aah, thanks! I sent the next chapter in pretty recently, so... Thanks so much for the review! :-)

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/06/07 15:56
Chapter: In the Moonlight

I think this is your best chapter and it's not just because they kissed, even though that was great. But I think this would have been my favorite chapter without that kiss.

Author's Response: Wow, really? It was actually one of my favorite chapters to write. I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/06/07 14:49
Chapter: A Thoughtful Morning and A Thoughtless Class

I loved this chapter. It was so cute and entertaining. I dont know what you are talking about saying it isnt interesting.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! It's always a relief to hear that people like a chapter... Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: aqua_dragon
Date: 06/05/07 3:38
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

don't be sorry! that was a great way to show their feelings for each other! that chapter was great! can't wait for more.
Aqua Dragon

Author's Response: Why thank you! It's reassuring to hear people like a story... :-) I'm so glad you like it, and I promise I'll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: LibertyV
Date: 06/04/07 15:16
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

I loved it please write more!!!!

Author's Response: Yay for double reviews!

Reviewer: LibertyV
Date: 06/04/07 15:16
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

I loved it please write more!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! I promise I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: KJRowling
Date: 06/03/07 15:14
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

Awww, definetly don't hate you. Fantastic chapter, loved the diamond thing. It wasn't jumpy, and well, it's good that it isn't entirely clear, you're kind of "easing" into the relationship thing, most people rush it, but it's more believable.

Can't wait for update (rhyme highly unintentional)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you don't hate me. I'm also glad that you liked the chapter so much, and that you think it's believable. Like you said, I don't want to rush into James/Lily's relationship. He, he, he. I liked the (unintentional) rhyme. I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: poshini
Date: 06/03/07 2:04
Chapter: Unusual Situations and a Moment's Hesitation

Okay not a bad chapter, though very confusing. Guess I need to wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Meh. I was sort of afraid of that. I hope it wasn't entirely too confusing. Everything will get explained, though. Thanks for the review! :-)

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