MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!

Name: llorias (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 21:01 · For: Once Upon A - What
im lovin it so far! I love how you portrayed Sirius. It made me laugh =D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sirius is one of my favorite characters, and to hear that you think I portrayed him well is music to my ears (or maybe its my ipod thats...oh nevermind) Anyways, many thanks for the lovely review. :-)

Name: emmaholloway (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 19:05 · For: Once Upon A - What
This is such a good start
The writing is actually amazing
It's hard to find a captivating story that is also well written but i think this ticks both boxes
looking forward to the next chapter
x x x

Author's Response: This is ironic. I just read your story earlier (Broken Hearts...I reviewed it and as I said before its really good, but sad...) Anyway, thanks for the review, and thanks for saying my writing is amazing *bows to your excellent complimenting/writing skills*. I submitted the next chapter a couple of days ago, so hopefully it will be up soon. Once again, thank you for the wonderful review!

Name: Miss Radcliffe (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 21:57 · For: Once Upon A - What
Great job! My only complaint is that Lily seems very Hermione-ish. It's a common cliche in J/L fics to characterize Lily exactly the same as Hermione (Hogwarts, A History). In truth Lily has many different qualities than Hermione. I liked the bit about Petunias' "Why-I-Hate-Magic List." I saw in an author response that you had gotten a rejection letter. This happened to me when I submitted my first story and again when I submitted another one of my chapters. Don't worry about it, just use the mods' comments to improve your story. Great job!

Miss Radcliffe~

Author's Response: Thanks. I know in a lot of James/ Lily fics Lily seems to act a lot like Hermione, it bugs me...However, in later chapters, Lily is going to be very unlike Hermione. Hermione would never...uh-oh, I better not say that. Anyway, thank you for the suggestion about not taking it personally (the rejection). I tend to be a little hot-headed (I blame my red hair, lol.) Thanks again for the review... By the way, I love your story.

Author's Response: Oh sorry, I just had to add this - Nice username. ;-)

Name: Magical_Lily (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 17:49 · For: Once Upon A - What
Great Story =)

Author's Response: Thank you. It is the first story I have posted here, and this review has definitely brightened my day and encouraged me to write more! :)

Name: Lilyputton (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 17:34 · For: Once Upon A - What
Not bad, I hope to read more in the future!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I've already got a couple of chapters written, but I am rather confused because I got a rejection letter and now this is posted. Not that you needed (or probably wanted to know that, but). Anyway, thank you so much for the review!

You must login (register) to review.