Reviewer: truelight
Date: 03/01/07 22:04
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

i will be in shock too if i behave like james in my school years.

Author's Response: So would I. Especially since I'm writing this fic and I know what James is doing and he's...*static*

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 03/01/07 22:02
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

i like it, because i imagen this is one way that Lily could begin get intersting in James.

Author's Response: Thanks! Your right, about fifth year (in this story) is when James and Lily started to clash, but you know what happens to people who people who are complete opposites (*cough* the title of the story *cough)...Many thanks for teh review!

Author's Response: Oi! That doesn't make sense! I meant: you know what happens to people who are complete opposites...

Reviewer: apples2apples
Date: 03/01/07 20:14
Chapter: Once Upon A - What



Author's Response: You think it's cool?! Thank you! *snort* I commend you for your choice in men.

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 02/22/07 22:49
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

I will be in schock too.

Author's Response: Your going into shock? Oh no, call the doctor! Sorry, I've been watching to many doctor shows....Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 02/22/07 22:39
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

Good start in the story

Author's Response: Why thank you!!

Reviewer: WelshGreen
Date: 02/18/07 14:29
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

Come on Come on Come on!! I can't wait for the next chapter too be validated!!

Author's Response: Oh really? Wow, thank you! I hope it get validated too! *drums fingers on computer, pondering whether or not to click refresh button* Thanks so much for the review!

Author's Response: I meant gets validated, not get validated... Sorry, I have weird quirks...

Reviewer: lilianpotter1234563
Date: 02/17/07 21:32
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

darn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its not validated yet *goes grr to the computer* hehehe lol i luv this it is awsum keep up the ggod work

Author's Response: You're grr-ing to the computer for me? Ahh, thank you so much (for the review and the grr-ing). ;-)

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 02/16/07 17:31
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

You're brilliant!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! (Now I'll definitely keep writing.) :-)

Reviewer: XColliFlourX
Date: 02/15/07 5:55
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

oh no cliffies!!!

Author's Response: Dun, dun, dun, dun!!

Reviewer: XColliFlourX
Date: 02/15/07 5:43
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

Lol that was funny!

Author's Response: Why thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Hp_4_eva
Date: 02/14/07 23:05
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

Ten bucks says it's a head badge.

Author's Response: I am so not taking that bet. ;-)

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 02/14/07 22:15
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

Well, he just became Head Boy. Am I right, or am I right? I so can't wait for the next chapter to be verified! Please mods, PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Your right *gasp* - or are you?! Sorry, couldn't help saying that. You can't wait for the next chapter - Thank you so much! I hope it'll get verified quickly too...Thanks so much for your review! (You have totally made my day) :-)

Author's Response: Er, I just realized something - its not day. So, I guess you made my - night? I'm weird, I know...

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/14/07 16:30
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

And he's just been made Head Boy! This looks like it's going to be a great story. Update soon!

Author's Response: He he got me. I tend to be really obvious as to what is going to happen, lol. Thank you so much for the compliment, I'll update as soon as I finish editing the next chapter. Thanks sooo much for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/11/07 21:30
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

Hey, I like it so far! keep it up!

The banter between Sirius and James is great - very lifelike, very...boyish? I don't know, I'm not a boy, but it seemed like that to me.

I like the joke James played on Lily in the beginning. And I like how she screamed it out loud - James Potter is the most handsome, dashing, brilliant, gor...

I also love how you portrayed the way that the characters think.

My only real concrete criticism is that in some places you need commas or periods, but you'll live without them. :-)


~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I tried to make Sirius and James very lifelike, but I didn't know how well it worked (I'm not a boy either). As for the joke James played on Lily, I decided that I wanted not completely crazy about Lily (yet*cough*). Thanks (again) for liking the way I portrayed the characters thoughts - I tried to make it as realistic as possible because it bothers me terribly when people write conversations in a completely formal un-real way. Thanks for pointing out that I need some commas and periods, I'll go take a look at that right now. Thanks so much for the wonderful review! :-) Oh, and I've read your poetry too, its really good, please post more!

Author's Response: i'm on a language binge and I just realized that I dropped words in "I decided that I didn't want him (James) to be completely crazy about Lily. Sorry, it was bothering me.... :-)

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/08/07 15:32
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

Yep, that was a compliment :D

Well, James is supposed to be a prat, and you made him out to be really annoying. So good job on that.

Can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I was trying to make James be really annoying because it goes with the rest of the story. (James is a prat around Lily, which certainly is not being helped by a certain Marauder *cough* Sirius *cough*)...The next chapter is in the queue, hopefully it will get validated. Ta.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/07/07 20:05
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

I love this fanfic!

And James just pissed me off at the start so that was good. You know, his portayal.

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! I'm going to take that having James piss you off in the beginning as a compliment, because I think that's how you meant it...if not, then...ah well, I'll assume its good since you said you loved this fanfic...I know, I know, higher level thinking going on here....Oh and cool username....

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 01/07/07 18:24
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

i think you have a good story here, i eagerly await watching it develop!

Author's Response: I bid you thanks once again. Aren't I giving? ;-) *Voices in head sneer at thought - giving? - How despicable!*

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 01/07/07 18:23
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

i think you have a good story here, i eagerly await watching it develop!

Author's Response: I bid you many thanks... I also tell you that I currently have a couple of chapters written, which are currently waiting to be posted.

Reviewer: mugglegrl10110
Date: 01/07/07 16:14
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

I like it so far!

Author's Response: Muchos gracias, senorita! (I'm assuming because your username is mugglegrl...). My Spanish friend would be so proud of me...too bad that's about the only Spanish I know, unless you count the word 'burrito'...hmm...Well, thanks for the review and hopefully another chapter will be up soon...Adios

Reviewer: llorias
Date: 01/06/07 21:01
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

im lovin it so far! I love how you portrayed Sirius. It made me laugh =D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sirius is one of my favorite characters, and to hear that you think I portrayed him well is music to my ears (or maybe its my ipod thats...oh nevermind) Anyways, many thanks for the lovely review. :-)

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