Reviewer: nikster
Date: 04/18/07 12:47
Chapter: Surprises

OMG great end ot the chapter!!
I can't believe it!! I wonder what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: You are officially the first person to tell me that was a great end of the chapter. Everyone else seems to be under the impression I'm quite evil. Really, such unfounded accusations *whistles innocently*. You wonder what happens next? I guess you'll just have to read the next chapter then! I know, shameless promotion of story. Couldn't help it! I've sent in the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon! Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 04/18/07 10:45
Chapter: Surprises

Eeeeeeekkk!!!! dont get Lily!!! your an amazing writer, ace story and I love the Selena character.

Author's Response: Don't worry, she'll be okay! I like Lily too much to hurt her - too bad, at least. You think I'm an amazing writer? Thanks so much! You like Selena too? Yay! I hoped at least someone would like her. (Since everybody hates Seth - icluding me.) Anyways, thanks for wonderful review! :-)

Author's Response: *I meant including...

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 5:08
Chapter: A Thoughtful Morning and A Thoughtless Class

Awww Parchment Doggies Are Cutee Hehe. Great Chapter BTW!

Author's Response: Yay parchment doggies! I thought that would be a very Sirius-ish way of passing the time. Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 4:49
Chapter: Lessons Without A Professor

Best Yet!! Wow! Loved Every Bit Of it

Author's Response: Why thank you! I actually like to think this chapter is pretty good myself! ;-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 4:30
Chapter: The Redhead Strikes Back

Oh.Sweet.Merlin!! Cant Belieeevve Lily Did That To Himm :( Poor Prongss, And Once Again...WOW!! AMAZING Chapterr!!

Author's Response: I know, I felt so bad for James when I was writing it. I would so love to give him a hug - for comfort only, of course! :-) Thanks for the love-rly review! :-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 4:28
Chapter: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet

Again...Wow!!! Sirius, Takes Him An Hour And A Half To Get Readyy Whatt A Girll Lol, It Was Hilarious When He Started Panicking Thinking His Hair Wasnt Perfect..
Gonnna Go Read The Next Partt...

Author's Response: Thanks! I've always pegged Sirius as one with some ego issues, and I thought he would also have a very lovely over-reaction to having his hair messed up. I read your bio... Thanks so much for mentioning me! I'm honored! :-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 4:22
Chapter: Once Upon A - What

Woww!!! You Are Brilliant! This Story Is Ace!! I Love How You've Showed Sirius In This, Already My Favourite Character =)

Author's Response: Why thank you! It's so nice to hear you think I've portrayed Sirius - I love his character so much, I really wanted to do it justice! :-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/18/07 4:17
Chapter: Surprises

Wow!! What A Cliffhanger!!! Cant WAIT To Read The Next Partt...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've sent in the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!

Reviewer: seizansha
Date: 04/17/07 23:19
Chapter: Surprises

tricky, very tricky! ^-~

just when you think... you went and twisted it. AND a cliffhanger!

i LOVE this anyway!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm tricky! You still love it even after the cliffhanger? I'm impressed. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 04/17/07 22:05
Chapter: Surprises

i will like to have a friend like James and someone like Lily that no need to many explain to understand friendship.

Author's Response: I'd like to have friends like James and Lily too! :-)

Reviewer: my name is naima
Date: 04/17/07 20:29
Chapter: Surprises

longer please......

Author's Response: Does this mean you want my chapters to be longer? Or does it mean you want me to continue? Why am I responding to a review (which is a response) with questions? Hmm...

Reviewer: jenni9632
Date: 04/17/07 20:27
Chapter: Surprises

ooo suspense. i love this story, keep it up! :)

Author's Response: I would say "Oh, the suspense is killing me!" in a (very loud) sing-song voice right now, but there's a few problems: A) Nobody would here it. B) I don't sing-song anything. Ever. C) I know what's going to happen! Just ignore everything but C. ;-) You love my story? *grins sheepishly* Thank ye kindly!

Reviewer: siriuslypadfoot62442
Date: 04/17/07 20:10
Chapter: Surprises


why would you do that to me??
here I got to the end, hoping to see a "next" button but no.
do you know what this means??
not only do I have to wait to see what happens (!!!) but now I have no excuse to study for a molec test that I have tomorrow.


Author's Response: So because of me you have to study? I am officially a horrible person. radcliffe4eva: Forcing students everywhere to study! *Dodges very large books* I'll try to update soon... :-)

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 04/17/07 18:47
Chapter: Surprises

dude..............oh my gosh........*starts to move frantically* update sooon!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: This chapter seems to be having an effect on people... :-) Don't worry, I'll update soon! :-)

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 04/17/07 18:40
Chapter: Surprises

Oh My God! OH MY GOD!!!! Must. Know. What. Happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon, I'm begging you! please?

Author's Response: I'm getting the notion that your just a wee bit curious what's going to happen? Hmm... Anyways, don't worry, I'll update soon! :-)

Reviewer: hope_is_bright
Date: 04/17/07 18:33
Chapter: Surprises

aaahhhh!!!!!!!!!! why the cliffie!!!!!!!! now im going to go crazy? will Lily and James be all right? *screams*

Author's Response: *Screams right along with you, which causes dog to look at me curiously* I know, evil cliffie, but I can know say from an author's point of view that they (the cliffhangers) are very fun to write. Exhilirating even. ;-) Will they be all right? Well, I guess you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out... *whistles innocently*

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 04/17/07 16:52
Chapter: Surprises

Why would Lily come outside with him and evil cliffhanger Great story so far update soon

Author's Response: Oh, there's a reason all right. I'm evil? Yay me! I've always wanted to be evil! Let's see, I would like to thank the academy, my dog, myself, the voices in my head...*clears throat* Ahem, anyways, thanks a lot, and I will update as soon as I can! :-)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 04/17/07 16:19
Chapter: Surprises

Wow!! That is all i can say! I've only just come onto this site, and your fan fic is the first i read, WOW!! Amazing!! As good as JKR'S HP!! Cant wait for the next one!!! WOW!! You Are An AMAZINGG Writer!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The first you read? I'm honored! But really, I'm not worthy of such praise. JK's genius far surpasses my...not genius-ness. But thanks so much, that's one of the nicest reviews I've ever had! Thanks so much!... Now I'm all happy, which means I'm off to go write. :-) This review deserves another smiley... :-D

Reviewer: maya12
Date: 04/17/07 16:11
Chapter: Surprises

that is the most evil cliff hanger i have ever read

Author's Response: Reeeally? I'm horrible, I know. I'll update soon...*cackles*

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 04/17/07 15:59
Chapter: Surprises

hmmmm. . . . please let that be anything BUT seth. (i dislike him A LOT)

Author's Response: That idea never even crossed my mind. Don't worry, I won't do it. And, I don't like him (Seth) either. Trust me, by the end of the story, you won't dislike him, you'll absolutely loathe him. (Message from brain to me: Queit now!)

Author's Response: *I meant quiet...

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