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Name: geminiginny (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 13:46 · For: Once Upon A - What
I liked the first chapter, it looks promising
( I mean, I only leave reviews to stories when there's something to say about them). Good characterisation and beginning, and the beginning is one of the hardest parts of a story. I loved the Queen Victoria type joke! Moving on to the next chappie....

Author's Response: Why thank you! I hope you like the following chapters. I tried to make the characters as realistic as possible, seeing as the information about them in the books is quite limited. You liked the Queen Victoria type joke? Thanks! I think your one of the few who actually noticed it. :-) Well, thanks for the review, and I really hope you like the following chapters!

Name: nikster (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 12:47 · For: Surprises
OMG great end ot the chapter!!
I can't believe it!! I wonder what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: You are officially the first person to tell me that was a great end of the chapter. Everyone else seems to be under the impression I'm quite evil. Really, such unfounded accusations *whistles innocently*. You wonder what happens next? I guess you'll just have to read the next chapter then! I know, shameless promotion of story. Couldn't help it! I've sent in the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon! Thanks for the review! :-)

Name: cocomaloco (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 10:45 · For: Surprises
Eeeeeeekkk!!!! dont get Lily!!! your an amazing writer, ace story and I love the Selena character.

Author's Response: Don't worry, she'll be okay! I like Lily too much to hurt her - too bad, at least. You think I'm an amazing writer? Thanks so much! You like Selena too? Yay! I hoped at least someone would like her. (Since everybody hates Seth - icluding me.) Anyways, thanks for wonderful review! :-)

Author's Response: *I meant including...

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 5:08 · For: A Thoughtful Morning and A Thoughtless Class
Awww Parchment Doggies Are Cutee Hehe. Great Chapter BTW!

Author's Response: Yay parchment doggies! I thought that would be a very Sirius-ish way of passing the time. Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 4:49 · For: Lessons Without A Professor
Best Yet!! Wow! Loved Every Bit Of it

Author's Response: Why thank you! I actually like to think this chapter is pretty good myself! ;-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 4:30 · For: The Redhead Strikes Back
Oh.Sweet.Merlin!! Cant Belieeevve Lily Did That To Himm :( Poor Prongss, And Once Again...WOW!! AMAZING Chapterr!!

Author's Response: I know, I felt so bad for James when I was writing it. I would so love to give him a hug - for comfort only, of course! :-) Thanks for the love-rly review! :-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 4:28 · For: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet
Again...Wow!!! Sirius, Takes Him An Hour And A Half To Get Readyy Whatt A Girll Lol, It Was Hilarious When He Started Panicking Thinking His Hair Wasnt Perfect..
Gonnna Go Read The Next Partt...

Author's Response: Thanks! I've always pegged Sirius as one with some ego issues, and I thought he would also have a very lovely over-reaction to having his hair messed up. I read your bio... Thanks so much for mentioning me! I'm honored! :-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 4:22 · For: Once Upon A - What
Woww!!! You Are Brilliant! This Story Is Ace!! I Love How You've Showed Sirius In This, Already My Favourite Character =)

Author's Response: Why thank you! It's so nice to hear you think I've portrayed Sirius - I love his character so much, I really wanted to do it justice! :-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 4:17 · For: Surprises
Wow!! What A Cliffhanger!!! Cant WAIT To Read The Next Partt...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've sent in the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!

Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 23:19 · For: Surprises
tricky, very tricky! ^-~

just when you think... you went and twisted it. AND a cliffhanger!

i LOVE this anyway!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm tricky! You still love it even after the cliffhanger? I'm impressed. Thanks so much!

Name: truelight (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 22:05 · For: Surprises
i will like to have a friend like James and someone like Lily that no need to many explain to understand friendship.

Author's Response: I'd like to have friends like James and Lily too! :-)

Name: my name is naima (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 20:29 · For: Surprises
longer please......

Author's Response: Does this mean you want my chapters to be longer? Or does it mean you want me to continue? Why am I responding to a review (which is a response) with questions? Hmm...

Name: jenni9632 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 20:27 · For: Surprises
ooo suspense. i love this story, keep it up! :)

Author's Response: I would say "Oh, the suspense is killing me!" in a (very loud) sing-song voice right now, but there's a few problems: A) Nobody would here it. B) I don't sing-song anything. Ever. C) I know what's going to happen! Just ignore everything but C. ;-) You love my story? *grins sheepishly* Thank ye kindly!

Name: siriuslypadfoot62442 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 20:10 · For: Surprises

why would you do that to me??
here I got to the end, hoping to see a "next" button but no.
do you know what this means??
not only do I have to wait to see what happens (!!!) but now I have no excuse to study for a molec test that I have tomorrow.


Author's Response: So because of me you have to study? I am officially a horrible person. radcliffe4eva: Forcing students everywhere to study! *Dodges very large books* I'll try to update soon... :-)

Name: Prongsies_Girl_93 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 18:47 · For: Surprises
dude..............oh my gosh........*starts to move frantically* update sooon!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: This chapter seems to be having an effect on people... :-) Don't worry, I'll update soon! :-)

Name: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 18:40 · For: Surprises
Oh My God! OH MY GOD!!!! Must. Know. What. Happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon, I'm begging you! please?

Author's Response: I'm getting the notion that your just a wee bit curious what's going to happen? Hmm... Anyways, don't worry, I'll update soon! :-)

Name: hope_is_bright (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 18:33 · For: Surprises
aaahhhh!!!!!!!!!! why the cliffie!!!!!!!! now im going to go crazy? will Lily and James be all right? *screams*

Author's Response: *Screams right along with you, which causes dog to look at me curiously* I know, evil cliffie, but I can know say from an author's point of view that they (the cliffhangers) are very fun to write. Exhilirating even. ;-) Will they be all right? Well, I guess you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out... *whistles innocently*

Name: Marauder_Luver2 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 16:52 · For: Surprises
Why would Lily come outside with him and evil cliffhanger Great story so far update soon

Author's Response: Oh, there's a reason all right. I'm evil? Yay me! I've always wanted to be evil! Let's see, I would like to thank the academy, my dog, myself, the voices in my head...*clears throat* Ahem, anyways, thanks a lot, and I will update as soon as I can! :-)

Name: Young Marauder (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 16:19 · For: Surprises
Wow!! That is all i can say! I've only just come onto this site, and your fan fic is the first i read, WOW!! Amazing!! As good as JKR'S HP!! Cant wait for the next one!!! WOW!! You Are An AMAZINGG Writer!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The first you read? I'm honored! But really, I'm not worthy of such praise. JK's genius far surpasses my...not genius-ness. But thanks so much, that's one of the nicest reviews I've ever had! Thanks so much!... Now I'm all happy, which means I'm off to go write. :-) This review deserves another smiley... :-D

Name: maya12 (Signed) · Date: 04/17/07 16:11 · For: Surprises
that is the most evil cliff hanger i have ever read

Author's Response: Reeeally? I'm horrible, I know. I'll update soon...*cackles*

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