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Name: my name is naima (Signed) · Date: 04/29/07 20:05 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
i love the fact that lilys an animagus

Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm glad to hear that! :-)

Name: Kathyhermy123 (Signed) · Date: 04/29/07 13:18 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
This is great!!! I can't wait to read more!!!!

Author's Response: You think it's great! Yay! I'll update soon as soon as I finish writing the next chapter (and finish looking over it)... Thanks for the review! :-)

Name: hlf_insn_insmnc (Signed) · Date: 04/29/07 13:16 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
i love how u made lily a fox!! thats so cool! and please, please, please, make lily and seth break up soon!! the fact that lily and james arent together is driving me crazy!!! lol.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I was hoping people would be okay with Lily being an Animagus. Apologies, but Lily and Seth are going to be together for a while longer - and the next chapter is probably going to bug you a bit too. But I promise, the wait will be worth it! James and Lily's relationship is like wine - it's ripened with time. Okay, that was kind of weird, forgive me. Either way, when Lily and James do get together, it will be fluffy - eventually. I'll leave you to ponder that... :-)

Name: KJRowling (Signed) · Date: 04/29/07 7:02 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
Evil, I want to know!

Good chapter, though it was rather confusing at first, with whether the memory was a dream or what actually happened. Interesting twist with the illegal anumagus thing and Lily being one.

But not telling was mean. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm evil. Bua ha ha *cough* ha ha. Okay, got that out now. As for the chapter being confusing, I hope it wasn't too confusing. I wanted it to be a little unclear, but if it's really too hard to follow, maybe I'll take a look at it and see what I can change. So you liked the Lily's an Animagus twist? I'm glad - I wasn't sure how well people were going to like. I'm sorry, but you're not going to find out what Selena was going to say for a while - I'll just say that it's actually pretty central to the plot. I'll update as soon as finish writing the next chapter! :-)

Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 04/29/07 0:31 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
:/ what's important... either selena really does like sirius... or she knows sage isn't really in love with lily, just out to get james instead....

the animagus twist was a little of a surprise-i was half expecting it to be sage and not lily. just curious, why a fox?

Author's Response: You're on the right track on the "what's important" thing. Not quite though. Honestly, the thought of either Sage being the one to "save" Lily never even crossed my mind - I figured she could save herself. A fox, you ask? Well, I always thought of Lily as rather intelligent - but not in an entirely "bookworm-ish". I figure she has a more "sly" side - and people always say foxes are sly -, which would make it easier for her to fall for someone (James) who is known for participating in pranks and for being a troublemaker. Plus, on the side, I made her a red fox, which matches her hair - but that didn't have anything to do with deciding her Animagus form. I hope that's a halfway decent explanation... Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: *I meant not in an entirely "bookworm-ish" way...

Name: hannahabbot2007 (Signed) · Date: 04/28/07 23:42 · For: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery
Yeah! Please write more!!!!

Author's Response: Okay first off... Whoo! My 100th review! *throws confetti and ballons (lots of confetti), cues band and applauds wildly... A few seconds later: attempts to comb confetti out of hair, crashes into band, popped ballons go wizzing by* Okay, got that out of my system. And now... Thanks! Don't worry, I'll write more. I'm working on the next chapter, and as soon as it's done I'll post it! :-)

Name: lily_lover1624 (Signed) · Date: 04/23/07 18:47 · For: Lessons Without A Professor
Hey, I'm writing a fan fic and I loved the idea of them getting drunk on firewhisky. Mind if I use it?

Author's Response: So long as it's not James getting drunk as a direct result of Lily breaking his poor little heart, I don't mind at all. Go ahead. The Marauders always struck me as the type to enjoy nursing a bit of a 'recreational' drinking habit.... :-)

Name: lily_lover1624 (Signed) · Date: 04/23/07 18:40 · For: The Redhead Strikes Back
I love it soo much!! You are a really good writer.

~ Princess Maddie

Author's Response: You love it? Ah, thanks so much! And thanks again for saying I'm a really good writer. I'm highly honored, Princess Maddie.*doffs imaginary hat and bows deeply* ;-)

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 9:26 · For: Surprises
Where's the rest
I want the rest I want the rest

#great story#

Author's Response: It's coming! I've already sent in the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon! You think my story is great? Thanks! *scuffs shoe on ground and grins sheepishly! ;-)

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 8:49 · For: A Thoughtful Morning and A Thoughtless Class
Thants was cute..the whole message thing during class.hahahaha

Author's Response: He, he. Thanks! I'm very glad you liked it! :-)

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 8:33 · For: Lessons Without A Professor
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, really? Thanks so much!

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 8:12 · For: The Redhead Strikes Back
He must be heart broken......I feel so sad.....change the plot now....hehehe

Author's Response: I know, I felt so bad for James when I wrote that! I won't change the plot, but I will promise you that he gets 'rewarded' for going through all his 'suffering'. ;-)

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 7:47 · For: A Typical Morning - On Another Planet
He made head boy!!!!!!
And so did lily flower...hahaha

Author's Response: Yep! Prongsie and Flower are Head Boy and Head Girl! :-)

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 7:25 · For: Once Upon A - What
This sounds good!!!!!

Author's Response: Why thank you! :-)

Name: iheartjames (Signed) · Date: 04/19/07 17:19 · For: Surprises
i happen to love your story except why don't you write more about Lily and Seth together? you only had that one small part where James said that he had to watch them being all girlfriend and boyfriendy.
Please submit another chapter soon! I want to know what will happen to Lily!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more Lily/Seth in the future, I'm just setting up everything else before it. I submitted the next chapter a few days ago, so hopefully it will be up soon. I'm glad to hear your curious about what's going to happen to Lily! Thanks for the review! :-)

Name: lucky girl (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 22:02 · For: Surprises
OMG seriously i hate when people do that. Well i think that this is a really good chapter!!!! It was written really nicely and i think it was funny when Lily saw James in a towel and only a towel. hahaha but now i want to read whats gonna happen next!!! Great jod!!!
~Lucky Girl

Author's Response: Sorry! I hate reading cliffhangers (I like writing them though)! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Your the first person to comment about the James in a towel situation... I've sent in the next chapter, so hopefully you'll get to see (er, read) what happens next soon! Thanks for the review! :-)

Name: Babieblonde5629 (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 20:37 · For: The Redhead Strikes Back
ooo poor james i wanna cry i feel so sorry for him! if lily has any kind of heart she will feel sorry for him too!

Author's Response: I know, poor James! He needs a hug. Don't worry, Lily has a conscience - it just ignores James for a while. :-)

Name: DarkPrincess0206 (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 15:54 · For: Surprises
You hate me don't you? That has to be it. That's the only explanation for such cruel behavior. Though I must admit it is very writer-ish of you to leave such an edge of your seat cliffhanger. If your update doesn't validate soon I think I'll actually cry.

Author's Response: I know, I am very evil! But honestly, writing cliffhangers is just plain exhilarating. I know, I should get out more - but that would take away from fanfiction time, which isn't going to happen, so... Edge of your seat cliffhanger? Whoo! I hate it when other people write cliffhangers like that, but really, like I said, writing them is kind of fun. Or really, really, really fun. Anyways... Aah! Don't cry! *Hands out tissues, pats consolingly on arm, and then nods in an annoyingly pompous (and supposedly consoling) manner* ;-)

Name: Obsessive (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 15:49 · For: Surprises
OOH! The story's certainly getting very interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: *Points finger and yells ooh too* :-) I'm happy you think it's interesting. I've sent in the next chapter, so hopefully there will be a new chapter up soon! :-)

Name: geminiginny (Signed) · Date: 04/18/07 13:46 · For: Once Upon A - What
I liked the first chapter, it looks promising
( I mean, I only leave reviews to stories when there's something to say about them). Good characterisation and beginning, and the beginning is one of the hardest parts of a story. I loved the Queen Victoria type joke! Moving on to the next chappie....

Author's Response: Why thank you! I hope you like the following chapters. I tried to make the characters as realistic as possible, seeing as the information about them in the books is quite limited. You liked the Queen Victoria type joke? Thanks! I think your one of the few who actually noticed it. :-) Well, thanks for the review, and I really hope you like the following chapters!

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