Reviewer: hayellbayell
Date: 05/07/07 22:11
Chapter: Surprises

lol this chapter was cute and funny

Author's Response: Really? Thanks so very much! :-D

Reviewer: aqua_dragon
Date: 05/07/07 3:19
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Oh cliffhanger!! so melodramatic! i love it!
please update soon, or i might set the record from dying of curiosty!!!
love the story so far you express the charcaters well, 'spec lilly's feelings!
Aqua_dragon
Ps please read my poem about sirius black, it's called black dog!!!

Author's Response: Dun, dun, dun, dun! Oh, you love it? Thanks so much. I'll try to update soon, don't die! Although that would be a rather interesting thing to put on your grave, "Here lies aqua_dragon; died from curiousity." Hmm, that was horribly morbid. Meh. It's nice to know that you think I express the characters well, I try to make them as realistic as I can. Thanks so much for the review! :-) (By the way, I took a look at your poem and reviewed it!)

Reviewer: Young Marauder
Date: 05/05/07 15:17
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

OMGG!! Plzz Update Soon !!!!

Author's Response: Okay! I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/02/07 13:25
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Interesting chapter!
I wonder who the people were and what spell Lily has been hit with!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out who the people were and what the spell was... I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 05/02/07 11:50
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! Whats happening to LillY?!!! please update soon!!! love the story !


Author's Response: You'll find out soon... I'll update soon too! You love my story? Ah, thanks so much! :-)

Reviewer: imheretosee
Date: 05/02/07 3:53
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

What happened!!is she ok? who was it? was it the marauders? going-to-be-deatheaters? Arrgh please pretty please post soon!

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! It definitely was not the Marauders... much closer on the second one, although not completely right. :-) I'll post soon, I promise!

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 05/01/07 21:58
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

oh my god why did you do that!!!!!!!!!!!!
arrrrrrrrr well now i'm most definitly gonna keep reading!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm horrible, I really am. Sorry! You're going to keep reading? Yay! :-)

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 05/01/07 19:25
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

LOVE THIS CHAPTER :-)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :-)

Reviewer: Hannahanders1
Date: 05/01/07 19:16
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

ohhhh cliff hanger?!?! NO update soon please!

P.S. Great story


Author's Response: Sorry, cliffhangers are evil to read, and fun to write. But that's not why I wrote this one. Really. ;-) Everything will be explained soon, and I'll try to update as quickly as I can (just because you said please). As for your P.S. - Many, many thanks!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/01/07 18:37
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Oh my gosh, what's gonna happen next??? AHHHHHH!!!!! I bet the Cruciatus Curse was the one used. But who could it be? Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: *Cues dramatic music* You'll see soon... Ah, who could it be, who could it be? Well, I'll tell you one thing, you definitely will not expect this one... I'll update soon, I promise! :-)

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 05/01/07 17:54
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Is it the Slytherins?? Oh please update! I'm dying here!
~Hannah Abbot

Author's Response: Wow, your good. But that's not what Lily was so very surprised (or rather, shocked) about. Please don't die. *Rushes over to perform CPR. You 'miraculously' wake up* ;-) I'll update soon!

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/01/07 17:39
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

what?!?!?!?!?
im lost!! totally cliffhanger!! i need a new chapter soon to explain what just happened!!!!!

Author's Response: Your supposed to be kind of lost - that way you'll just have to read the next chapter! ;-) I'm kidding, that's not the real reason I wrote what I did... But anyways, I'll try to post a new chapter as soon as I can, and hopefully it will explain everything. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 05/01/07 17:38
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

No!! What on earth have you done to Lily? Curses, curses!

Author's Response: *Dodges curses* Sorry! I needed to do it... it was either do it this way, or write loads and loads of really boring chapters to lead up to it! I promise, Lily will be okay!

Reviewer: hlf_insn_insmnc
Date: 05/01/07 17:34
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

what just happened?!?!?!?!!!??

Author's Response: It's confusing, I know. It'll be explained, don't worry your little insomnia ridden head about it. ;-)

Reviewer: muggleofmagic13
Date: 05/01/07 16:52
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

oooo! suspense. i luuurve it!! write more!!!! soon!!!

Author's Response: Yay suspense! I'll update soon, I promise... this chapter got validated way quicker than I expected, so the next chapter won't be up right away, but worry not, I'll post soon! :-)

Reviewer: luckycharm
Date: 05/01/07 14:55
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Ok, I think I may have cracked a rib from laughing so much at this. Sirius is pure genius! But I want to know what happened to Lily!!!! Will she be saved by James and it'll be "Oh James however can I repay you? I love you- mwah!"

Author's Response: He, he, he... Thanks! I love Sirius, and hearing you think I made him funny is quite nice! Well, I can't (won't) tell you exactly what you'll see next chapter, but it's definitely not what you expect. I can't promise there will be lots of 'mwah-ing', althought that is a good idea... :-)

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 04/30/07 19:00
Chapter: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery

This is one of my favorite stories on MNFF!!! i hope you write a chapter like once a day :-)

Author's Response: Oh wow! Really? That is so - let me quote Rupert Grint here, "That's wicked!". Thanks so much! I'll try to update as quickly as I possibly can. :-D

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 04/30/07 12:41
Chapter: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery

Wow great chapter!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll submit the next chapter soon...

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 04/29/07 22:46
Chapter: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery

That was an amazing chapter! Okay, I know you just updated, but could you update AGAIN? and really soon? Thanks!!! *squeals* The fox was a really good choice, cuz foxes are really smart, and Lily is the smartest person ever. Other than Dumbledore. Luv the chapter/story!

Author's Response: Wow, really? Thanks so much! I'll post the new chapter soon - probably by tomorrow. I'm glad you thought the fox was a good choice for Lily, it's a relief to hear. You love my story? Yay! :-)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/29/07 21:52
Chapter: A Dream, An Explanation, and A Mystery

True!!!!
Maybe she is...who noes...anyways
I love that christopher columbus joke...hahaha
Update soon
Good story


Author's Response: Yay, I actually made a decent point! (So there is a first for everything...) I'm glad I can amuse you! :-) I'll update soon, and thank you!

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