Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 05/22/07 16:24
Chapter: In the Moonlight

I didn't really notice the passing time... I guess because there wasn't any clear sign, but this was a very good chapter =]
keep it up I like this story a lot!

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to say "a few weeks later". You're right, there really wasn't any clear time I really mentioned time passing, except that we got to another full moon. You like it? Thanks so much!

Reviewer: muggleofmagic13
Date: 05/22/07 15:16
Chapter: In the Moonlight

O, gosh, i loved it!! quietly suspenseful the whole time. I was waiting for the kiss to happen without realizing it. So great. WRITE MORE!! there was a typo in htere by the way. you wrote a seth where you should have wrote a james. it sed "Seth tucked a long strand of black hair behind his ear" just letting you kno.

Author's Response: Yay! You loved it. I tried to make it suspenseful, I'm glad I actually did. I'll try to update soon. Thank you very much for pointing that out, it sort of ruins the moment, you know? :-)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 05/22/07 15:08
Chapter: In the Moonlight

Awesome! That's really good, i love it! Add the next chapter as soon as possible! Do it now! Don't read he rest of this, Do it NOW!!!! Please.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I'll really, really try to update soon... Sorry, I'm naughty, I read the rest... Bad me... I really will try to update soon!

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 05/22/07 14:38
Chapter: In the Moonlight


Author's Response: You're very welcome! I figured then would be just as good a time as any...

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 05/22/07 14:31
Chapter: In the Moonlight

i love this story! i cant wait for the "awkward moments." lol, please update at super-sonic speed!

Author's Response: *giggles stupidly* You love it? Thanks so much! Yes, the next chapter will be oh-so-very awkward. Te he. I'll update as soon as I can! :-)

Reviewer: Charmed_S
Date: 05/22/07 10:54
Chapter: In the Moonlight

awww... that's all I can say...
but there's also -- AHA! i knew it was Seth.. he a dark wizard of some sort? weird odd secret hidden maybe? threathened selena - she somehow in on this secret?.. oo the suspense...:D
I knew seth wasn't good news when that shadow passed his eyes when lily told him not to treat the house elf so badly (yes I remember) =)
Update update!

Author's Response: Ha, ha! Someone remembered! *bows down and praises* Nice predicting on the Seth part... You'll find out what Seth really is soon, and it may or may not surprise you. I'm not sure, you seem pretty good at guessing. Thanks for the review, I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/22/07 10:45
Chapter: In the Moonlight

so adorable! yet would awkward moment have to involve sirius, i wonder?

also, why did seth curse lily with a dark curse?im so confused! explain!
oh and pretty please with chocolate frogs on top update again soon!

Author's Response: Wait, so you want Sirius in it? That might have worked out interestingly... You'll find out why Seth did what he did soon. Chocolate frogs? I'll definitely try to update soon, now! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/22/07 10:44
Chapter: In the Moonlight

great chapter!!
thanxfor being so nice!!
cont soon

Author's Response: Thanks! You are very welcome, I'm such a giver, aren't I? :-)

Reviewer: happy4
Date: 05/22/07 9:49
Chapter: In the Moonlight

Umm....don't know if this is a typo or something but:James stopped laughing immediately. I meant, er, I mean, uh - Seth tucked a long strand of black hair behind his ear.

Why does it say Seth? Shouldn't it say James?????


Author's Response: Oh dear! I'll go fix that... right now. Thanks for pointing that out!

Reviewer: Lasselanta
Date: 05/18/07 0:35
Chapter: Changes

Oh, I didn't find this chapter boring at all! Quite the contrary, I thought it sets up several very interesting situations - the suspense! ;) It's also sweet how James just can't keep his eyes off Lily...

Author's Response: Why thank you! It was meant to set some things up for future chapters, I'm glad you picked up on that! Yeah, I figure that even though Lily is now somewhat more 'friendly' with the Marauders, James would still be more than a little fond of her... Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: I Am Peeves
Date: 05/16/07 17:27
Chapter: Changes

Ugh, I hate waiting for chapters when the author's already sent them to the mods. Well, I really liked the last two chappies and I hope the next one gets accepted soon.

Author's Response: I hate waiting too, but the mods have lots of other stuff to do, so... It's nice to know that you liked the last two chapters! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: x_bewitched_x
Date: 05/16/07 17:03
Chapter: Changes

I love your story! This chapter was very interesting. I liked the end with James and Lily. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's nice that you think it's interesting. :-) I've submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon!

Reviewer: Charmed_S
Date: 05/15/07 13:58
Chapter: Changes

Hey, I just began reading your story - and overall i loved that you made Lily an Animagus, is there a particular reason she's a fox? as in Foxy Lady by hendrix :D?
anway, i ddnt think this chapter was boring actually - but interesting that the marauders are her new friends now...
was is both the sags that attacked her? hope its not selena... update soon!

Author's Response: Hullo there! I'm glad you liked the fact that Lily was an Animagus. There is a reason (at least in my mind) that I thought Lily's Animagus form would be a fox. I've always viewed Lily as someone who was very smart, although not particularly in an entirely 'book-wormish' way. I figure her intelligence has a sort of 'sly' side (and people always say foxes are sly). I figure that Lily's tendency to be, well, 'sly', would help her to accept the Marauders - well, sort of accept them, anyway. You know, I didn't think of Foxy Lady by Hendrix when I wrote it, but come to think of it... ;-) Thanks for saying the chapter wasn't boring, I was afraid people wouldn't like it much. I'll tell you now that having the Marauders as her friends is a major part of my plot, so... Don't worry, Selena didn't attack Lily! I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/15/07 5:51
Chapter: Changes

Interesting chapter!
I wonder what has happened between Lily, Seth and Selena!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon!

Author's Response: You'll find out... it's probably not what you expect, either. You can't wait? Ah, thanks! I'll try to update soon! :-)

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/14/07 23:29
Chapter: Changes

Aww, what a short chapter! You couldn't have made it, oh, maybe a half a page longer at least? My favorite quote is:
'Peter thought that they were all just too hormonal.

Sirius believed that they had all got their wands stuck up their arses.'
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Sorry! I'll try to update soon! I'm glad you liked those particular bits of the story, I thought they were funny too! :-)

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 05/14/07 23:23
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

How Jack Sparrow-ish of Sirius. I loved it!! Great job!

Author's Response: Jack Sparrow-ish? Yay! I love Jack Sparrow (and Sirius). Thanks for always leaving such lovely reviews! :-)

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/14/07 21:35
Chapter: Changes

i am still confused as to who did this to lily but i love how the marauder's are watching over lily

Author's Response: It will be explained soon... It's nice to know that you like the fact the Marauder's are watching over Lily, I was afraid it wouldn't seem realistic enough. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 05/14/07 20:39
Chapter: Changes

this chapter wasnt boring, it was interesting. i like this story a lot!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'm flattered that you like my story so much! :-)

Reviewer: naty0452
Date: 05/14/07 20:38
Chapter: Changes

It was an okay chapter. I wouldn't say boring but not really exciting either. Hope the next one is up soon I totally want to know what happens. This is most defenetly one of the best stories here. Sorry I don't review more often but I do love this story!!!!!!!!!!!! keepm coming

Author's Response: Thanks you. I knew it wasn't at all exciting, but it's nice to now it wasn't terribly boring. I'll try to post soon. I'm honored that you think this is one of the best stories here - that's such a wonderful compliment! It's okay, the fact that your reviewed now makes up for it! Thanks so much for the wondeful review!

Author's Response: *He, he, he. I meant 'thank' you...

Reviewer: x_bewitched_x
Date: 05/14/07 18:01
Chapter: Unwelcome Thoughts and Even More Unwelcome Voices

Oh my gosh! I love the end! I can't wait to read the rest!!

Author's Response: You loved it? Ah, thanks! I've submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up soon! :-)

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