Reviewer: angel96s
Date: 10/27/11 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 3

i like the way where the story is going...

Reviewer: simplyimmaterial
Date: 05/28/11 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 13

You have gotten the characters completely down! Amazing fics!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 2:29
Chapter: Chapter 13

Wonderful story. Thank you.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 2:14
Chapter: Chapter 12

nice night now comes the oh-oh. Hope Ron takes it in stride.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 1:48
Chapter: Chapter 11

Who? Are we talking that Ron snuck back..or are we talking Viktor taking liberties/

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 1:28
Chapter: Chapter 10

There must be a rason but I can't figure out why Hermione, et al can apparate close to the undercover bar but Hermione can't apparate to her job when it is pouring rain. Still a great chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 1:03
Chapter: Chapter 9

How exciting. Vanishing cabinets, cool. Can't wait to see where this goes. There are several spelling/grammer errors that you keep making. Although they don't distract from the story, they are annoying. Just saying.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 8

Explosive.........great.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 0:19
Chapter: Chapter 7

Oh my. This thing with Ron and Hermione not owning up to their feelings is driving me crazy. They are wasting time they should be spending together. Scary Alex is back. I'm nervous of what he will try with Hermione. Moving on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/21/11 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 7

Oh my. This thing with Ron and Hermione not owning up to their feelings is driving me crazy. They are wasting time they should be spending together. Scary Alex is back. I'm nervous of what he will try with Hermione. Moving on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/20/11 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 6

I was right about the unexpected person being Alex. I like the ear piece idea. Cunning. I don't much care for Leslie but that means you have written her character well. Scary about Alex. In no way so I think he is the least bit trustworthy.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/20/11 23:23
Chapter: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter. i like being invited into a world that might have been. this seems so real and so exciting. Now who could the person be whom Hermione never expected to see? Alex perhaps. But if it Alex will he blow Hermione's cover. Maybe it isn't Alex. Well let me move on and find out.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/20/11 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 4

Wow. Hermione has some dangerous excitement in her life for a bit. Hope Ron doesn't find out and accidentally come across this Alex b ut I know that is probably going to happen. Wonder what's going on with this club. Sounds like some shady characters or at least one shady character is going to be tripped up by Harry and Ron. As for being pulled into the alley, since both Hermione and Ginny were pulled in at the same time, I figure Ron and Harry are on the job. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/20/11 22:37
Chapter: Chapter 3

Great story so far. I like your concept of the 4 moving to Grimmauld Place. I just like the fact that they are all together anyway. Can't wait to see what happens. Congrats to all 4 on their careers.

Reviewer: Gagaoverginny
Date: 01/10/11 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 13

It was so beautiful and funny, you did a FANTASTIC job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 12/12/10 8:06
Chapter: Chapter 13

you are awesome.. amazing writer.. great story

Author's Response: thanks and I do appreciate your following so late in the game. I wrote these so long ago...they still inspire me to write...I am knocking a book around...a late teed young adult fiction...can't quite get the hook...but we'll see. Thanks and stay safe durring the holidays

Reviewer: September December
Date: 07/02/10 5:17
Chapter: Chapter 13

Awwwww :) Really cute fic. Very fluffy.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Ggigx
Date: 05/22/09 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent work,way to go.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 08/15/08 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 13

i love this.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: K_Bella
Date: 08/15/08 9:20
Chapter: Chapter 11

WOAH....LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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