Ohhh that was beautiful! I almost started crying!
Author's Response: Thank you Lily. All reviews are greatly appreciated. :)
This was wonderful :-). Im happy that you love poetry so much. It really is like magic isn't it?
Anyway, the words flowed very nicely in you poem, and you got a good rhym scheme :-)
This was my favorite part:
Wars are not always won with fighting and strife
Instead of your wand, reach out with your heart
For that is where healing always will start.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's actually one of my favorite poems that I have written.
Aww! Very sweet insprirng poem! Enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love writing poetry and plan to submit more of it. :)
Aww I really like this poem! It's brilliant and very sweet. I can imagine Lily writing this to Harry [though she may not have rhymed it as well...]
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you, but I'm certain Lily was good with words. After all, she was very smart. Thank you for the compliments!