Reviewer: Lily of the US
Date: 01/03/07 12:56
Chapter: Lily's Letter to Harry

Ohhh that was beautiful! I almost started crying!


Author's Response: Thank you Lily. All reviews are greatly appreciated. :)

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 01/03/07 12:20
Chapter: Lily's Letter to Harry

This was wonderful :-). Im happy that you love poetry so much. It really is like magic isn't it?

Anyway, the words flowed very nicely in you poem, and you got a good rhym scheme :-)

This was my favorite part:

Wars are not always won with fighting and strife

Instead of your wand, reach out with your heart

For that is where healing always will start.


Keep writing!


Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's actually one of my favorite poems that I have written.

Reviewer: Simple Genius
Date: 01/03/07 7:02
Chapter: Lily's Letter to Harry

Aww! Very sweet insprirng poem! Enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love writing poetry and plan to submit more of it. :)

Reviewer: lillede
Date: 01/03/07 4:27
Chapter: Lily's Letter to Harry

Aww I really like this poem! It's brilliant and very sweet. I can imagine Lily writing this to Harry [though she may not have rhymed it as well...]

*10/10*
~lillede

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you, but I'm certain Lily was good with words. After all, she was very smart. Thank you for the compliments!

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