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Name: harrypotterfangirl21 (Signed) · Date: 07/24/07 3:45 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
That was sad but beautiful! You're a really good writer, I've read some of your other stories and they are fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Name: harrypotterfangirl21 (Signed) · Date: 07/24/07 3:45 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
That was sad but beautiful! You're a really good writer, I've read some of your other stories and they are fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Fred the Duck (Signed) · Date: 05/31/07 22:49 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
so sweet! i absolutely loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Fred the Duck (Signed) · Date: 05/31/07 22:41 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
its wondermous! its angst so its supposed to be dark! but why did you have to kill george?!!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so sorry! But I'm glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Padfoot519 (Signed) · Date: 05/26/07 3:13 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
sad but sweet

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Ritter (Signed) · Date: 05/15/07 23:07 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Wow, that was a beautiful story...it made me tear up and everything *sniff*. You write beautifully, keep up the good work, its amazing.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, dear. Made me smile. ~Lindsey :)

Name: FlightofthePhoenix (Signed) · Date: 05/14/07 1:03 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Great job Lindsey, a very sweet ending to it and I very much enjoyed it. Keep the good work up!


Author's Response: Thanks, Nicole! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 10:17 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Man...this fanfic would have been better with more chapters. Although it was a good idea and all, everything was rushed.

Author's Response: Thanks. ~Lindsey :)

Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 10:15 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
Oh man. It's taking a LONG time for the Trio to find the horcruxes. Too many deaths in one chapter but this IS dark/angsty...so it's reasonable

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you liked it. ~Lindsey :)

Name: Potter62442 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/07 14:06 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
Perfect. Not too dark, not too emiotional. PERFECT

Author's Response: Thanks! ~LIndsey :)

Name: h_vic (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 15:21 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Very sad, but very good! Sometimes the whole "lets name the baby after someone who's died" thing can seem a bit of an over-used cliche be you made it work really well. I think it was because the baby was born straight after the death rather than ten years down the line or something, which made it much more poignant and believable.

It was also very moving that you had Harry's last thoughts being of Ginny and his daughter and if they would forgive him. Also, when Ron pulled himself back from the brink by the realisation that he couldn't leave his unborn son fatherless, I liked that he also thought of Ginny at that point. I could imagine him keeping a very close eye on his sister and her daughter, with Harry gone, out of duty to his friend as much as , obviously, brotherly concern.

I really liked the slight comic relief early on as well though in contrast - the banter between Harry and Voldemort was perfect and,

"So … I’m a Horcrux, and you’re one too. We both have to die." Harry said slowly.

"No. Only you do." Voldemort said.
had me in stitches. Harry really missed the point there didn't he, bless him!

One tiny little nit-pick that I noticed was in, Ron Weasley watched in agony as his best mate, died that day. I think you need the comma after agony not mate.

Author's Response: Ha ha, I never actually thought of it being comic like that. Hmmm . . . well, maybe I did because I wrote it like that, but yah. LOL, I'm glad that made you laugh. I'm so glad that you liked this story! I will go back and change it after your two lovely reviews! Thanks so much! *huggles* ~Lindsey ;)

Name: h_vic (Signed) · Date: 03/21/07 15:01 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
Oooh I really enjoyed this! You create a really lovely balance in the chapter between the gentle domesticity at the start and the horror at the end; the two halves complement each other perfectly.

I love that you had Hermione insisting that she was going to go despite being heavily pregnant and Ron realising that he couldn't stop and grieve because he had to finish the fight. Those moments just suit both of their characters perfect and really re-emphasise why they are Griffindors.

I thought the look Harry and Ron shared as if saying goodbye was really poignant. It summed up the depth of their friendship perfectly without forcing them to have any OOC conversation about their emotions(!) or breaking the flow of the battle scene.

One tiny little thing I noticed which just felt a little awkward to me was when Ron told Harry about Neville being dead and Harry said, “Luna is going to be devastated. You know that they’ve been married since our seventh year, when we all joined the Order.” It feels a bit like Harry is telling Ron something he'd already know just for the benefit of the reader, if that makes any sense? You could quite easily just leave it at "Luna is going to be devastated." because the reader will be able to infer the rest without it being flagged up or you might want to consider having the explanation as narrative not dialogue. Just a suggestion.

Author's Response: That was such a marvelously detailed review that you have me smiling as I am typing this!!! *huggles to death* Thank you SO much for that lovely review. I do get what you are saying about the Luna part. I think that I might actually go back and put it in context, when I have time. Thanks so much for poitning that out. I'm glad that you liked the look between Harry (it's my fav part to write) and the part about Hermione and Ron being in Gryffindor for an actual reason. :) Thanks so much for reading! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Lady Alanna (Signed) · Date: 02/17/07 18:19 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
Wow...Neville...George...Mr. Malfoy...Draco Malfoy...Harry...that's a lot of people dead. It was still a good story though. I know this sounds cruel, but thanks for killing off Percy. I never did like him much...you did me a favor. LOL.
I really liked how Ron and Hermione named their child Harry.
Also, you must really like Carrie Underwood songs. You've named a bunch of stories after them. I luv Carrie too, she's my favorite.

Author's Response: Thanks... oh, and you're welcome for killing off the Perce-man. He's not my fav either, he's just misunderstood. I just killed him off this time... *growls at self* Thanks for your review! ~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: OOOh, and I LOVE CArrie Underwood! I actually haven't been listening toher lately, because I've been stuck on Hilary Duff, but you know how that goes... ~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Typos are er- fun... *giggles* I apologise.

Name: Soccer_rocks_likeHP (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 18:10 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Amazing! Really tear-jerking a must read if I do say so myself!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your lovely compliments! I'm really glad that you are enjoying my work! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Soccer_rocks_likeHP (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 17:44 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
That was amazing! Terribly sad though. I really liked George. But the Malfoy's deserved to die. Poor Neville!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy that you thought that it was amazing! I know... Poor Neville.. I get called out on that a lot.. *giggles* Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Name: wonwon_hermy (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 20:27 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
aww how cute... it was nice of them to name the baby after him BUT harry DIED thats made me very sad

Author's Response: Aw.. I'm really sorry. But I got a good plot bunny, and went with that! Thanks for your compliments! ~Lindsey :)

Name: mate (Signed) · Date: 01/29/07 5:49 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Lindsey I must say it's a wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, mate! I'm glad that you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Name: Gin_PotterGirl (Signed) · Date: 01/28/07 12:03 · For: Terror At Hogwarts
Hello Lindsey!

I thought this story was really good! You portrayed everything nicely! Overall, very nice story. I wish it was mine! -_- Just kidding.

Oh, and JKrowlingfan54, I am standing up for one of my BFFL's on this site, and I am gonna ask you something:

Do you have a story on MNFF? You should try it. It is very hard. I have 5 right now, but Lindsey and I have worked hard to get our stories up here. Please don't send Flames to all of her stories. Oh, sorry if I sound mean, I'm trying not to be.

Oh yeah...Lindsey, sorry if this was spam, but I did review it!


Author's Response: Thanks MIchelle! THat's very nice of you! *giggles* I'm glad that you liked my story, well, so much that you thought it was yours! *giggles again* I got those mean-o reviews deleted. Thanks again for your review! ~Lindsey :)

Name: ginny_malfoy22 (Signed) · Date: 01/24/07 15:26 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
That is so cool! Really well done. I knew once Harry died that they were going to end up calling the baby Harry. Really well done!

Author's Response: *giggles* Aw Man! I was hoping that it would be a surprise. Ah well. I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks, ~Lindsey :)

Name: MJ_Padfoot (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 20:12 · For: Life's Meaning Comes From Death
Wowzers Lindsey! This is great! It's really cute and I love how it ended! Great fiction! MJ

Author's Response: THanks MJ, again! Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I'll be sure to get to After the Rainfall soon! ~Lindsey :)

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