Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 02/19/07 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

oooh, I can see what happens next! i must be a phony Seer too! and nice job as always, for the hilarity continues.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, there's too much fun ahead! Just you wait!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/19/07 10:07
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

"PS: I don't want a wedding gift - Bill Weasley.
PS2: But I defineetly does! - Fleur Delacour."

That made me laugh, especially since "PS2" made me think of Play Station 2. And I also really liked "Bill's grown new canine teeth," "Bob Baldysort" and Ron's exclamation of "Hey mate, prat, git, chum!" Your version of Ron in this story is great, very funny.

I also laughed out loud at the "Four-Legged Tap-dance."

Moody and Figgy make a great couple, in my opinion. ^_^


Author's Response: That Moody-Figg ship was so random, it just struck me then and there...so great that you liked it..Keep reading!!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 02/19/07 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

I almost forgot how much I love this story. I would love to watch "Ron's Fun Corner!" And the whole deal with Trelawney and Tonks was hysterical! ("'Pariah' is my middle name!") Really, this is great! The Wagga- Wagga werewolf song is great, and the Love potion made me giggle considerably.

This is a great chapter. You're very funny and creative!

Author's Response: Thanks Shmerg...it's so great to see you've made a "reader comeback", I missed your reviews!

Reviewer: lily_007
Date: 02/19/07 9:36
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

It was excellent.......i loved it.........eagerly awaiting the next chapter....

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, lily! I am too!

Reviewer: The Weasley Triplet
Date: 02/15/07 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

I laughed so hared at this, particularly the first chapter.

Author's Response: Ahahaa! Another new reader! Keep 'em coming! Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Loup_garou
Date: 02/12/07 9:31
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

This is my kind of humour! Keep up the farcical goodness!

Author's Response: *checks meaning of "farcical"* Thank you so much for the review! I was dying to hear that the humour was farc-whatsthatword...it so nicely describes its genre! Keep reading my valiant voyager, because there are many to go!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 02/11/07 13:29
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

Haha. "Canon characters only!" This is shaping up to be a very amusing fic. Trelawney is definately in trouble now... maybe she should have SEEN that her perfect guy was already taken?

Author's Response: Ah..that poor old fraud! Wish she could actually See something voluntarily!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 02/08/07 22:58
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

hehe, this is good, please write a new chapter soon! :D

Author's Response: I'd written that chapter before submitting this one! Just waiting for the beta'ing...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 02/04/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

I hope it gets funnier as it goes, because that was hilarious!

Author's Response: Well, you'll have to check that...chapters 2 and 3 have already been posted!

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 02/04/07 4:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

Loved it, especially the canon characters only part. I can't really think of anything else to say, so I hope you enjoy this mildly short review, which actually turned out longer than I anticipated

Author's Response: That's ok, it's not the length but the thought that counts...
Incidentally....nice to know that your noblest of thoughts add up to two-and-a-half lines! lol

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 02/03/07 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

Hmm... an intriguing chapter. It has great potential... let us see if it lives up to it, eh what? :)

Author's Response: Yes, Zoheb it definitely will, I assure you! Actually I wanted to throw a bit of plot in the whole thing too. Thanks for the review, Keep reading!!!

Reviewer: LoonyGirl
Date: 01/31/07 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Really nice job, this story is quite funny. I do like the first part better than the second though....
"Success Rate:9%"
*falls over laughing* that was great that was...

Author's Response: Really, you really feel so? I liked the second part more...anyways NOTHING beats the third chapter...you just wait!

Reviewer: Ginny Lupin
Date: 01/30/07 1:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

Come on mods. Get a move already

Author's Response: I know I'm waiting.... In fact I've already completed the chapter after the third one too...this is like ... [CENSORED]!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 01/21/07 5:54
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

"Aaah," he sighed, fondling the wand between his veined fingers, "I remember this one.” (Voldemort slapped his forehead) “Nine-and-a-half inches, celery core and containing the appendix of a Fire Crab…bought by a child with a big bottom…"

Wormtail blushed.

OMG! I'm loving this stroy.....the sarcasm is excellent. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: You'll get your wish soon, Wormy...oops Bookwormy! I don't want you to share a nickname with Wormtail!

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 01/17/07 9:14
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

*Thumbs up*

Author's Response: *Big grin*

Reviewer: Transcendence
Date: 01/17/07 8:47
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

Ollivander and Shakira movements? That part was hilarious! :D And I loved the whole "Harry has lost so much" part, that really, really cracked me up. The storyline just keeps getting better!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Transcendence!! (hope i spelt it right!) I'm grateful to see that older readers still find the fic worty enough to come back to!

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 01/16/07 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

This one was hilarious too!! I nearly fell of my chair a few times...Ollivander doing Shakira movements? I'm not sure thats a visual that I needed, but it was rather amusing nonetheless. I can relate to your mugglenet struggles...I seem to have the same problem! :D I loved the Harry/Ron/Hermione scene, how McGonagall couldn't get Tonks' name right, and the not-so-subtle cough of 'brother-in-law" *laughs some more* fiery spiders. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

~emoprincess26

Author's Response: Thanks you so much emoprincess. It's lovely to find new readers. I have completed most of chapter three but had to split it into three because of its length. I'll be sending it for beta'ing and lets hope it comes out soon! Keep reading :)

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 01/16/07 21:15
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

If it's only going to get funnier, I'm certainly in trouble, since I spent the whole chapter sitting in front of the computer giggling to myself (the others in the house probably heard me and thought I'm insane) Great job, I can't wait to read more...So I'm off to the next chapter! :D

~emoprincess26

Author's Response: Thing is, I was quite dissapointed with Chapter 1. It was not very "refined". This is my first dig at humour and people don't make me out to be a very socially humorous individual. But I'm so pleased that you liked it Thank you very much!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/16/07 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahhahahahahahdgdagahjdgjhbfhjbjnxxkjdxajccthhhpppbbt....

Author's Response: And that accurately conveys an emotion which i wanted people to read after reading this fic! THANKS!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/16/07 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

this is great. i love the beginning, it pulled me right in. that bit at the end is reminiscent of "to infinity, and beyond!"

Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear that you liked it. While thinking about the fic, I never intended it to be descriptive. But soon I realised that descriptions in right places are great assets and do not dissuade readers from moving forwards, contrary to popular belief! Thanks a lot!

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