Reviewer: Karma_k2
Date: 04/13/07 0:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

ROFL!! *GiggleGiggleSnort* Ohhhh dear!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: lily_007
Date: 04/08/07 10:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND PLZZ MAKE IT FAST

Author's Response: I definitely will...and this time, I won't ever leave until I finish this fic

Reviewer: Shadow2007
Date: 04/07/07 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

oh my gosh.... this was so totally stupid- and AWESOME.... very funny.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/18/07 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. EEEEEEWWWWWWWW! What a couple! *shiver* I didn't understand what Voldy said to Lockhart about his Momma...?

Author's Response: Voldemort's Britishisms are as bad as mine

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/18/07 10:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my goodness! If it ain't Lupin, it's....................................................................................................................GREYBACK! NOOOOOOOOO! Even tho no one said Greyback was a Hogwarts teacher, ya never know... Plus, even if he wasn't, he-lloooo, this is FAN FICTION: WHERE ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE! DUN DUN DUN DUN! And a MWAH HAHAHAHAHAHA to you! Very good, very funny!

Author's Response: Go on...the next chapter has the answer...and new will come too soon!!!

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 03/17/07 11:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This was so funny that I almost fell out of my chair. But guess what? my brother ruined it. why? cuz he made me so mad that i am FUMING AND IM NOT LAUGHING ANY MORE SO PLZ DO MY THE COURTESY OF KILLING HIM! HE RUINED UR STORY AND MY REVIEW AFTER ALL!

breathe breathe breathe

very good and HILARIOUS STORY!

my brother is driving me to the point of tears. im not kidding. i hate him.JKLGFDBW;JKOHDSgflhjkdsnvcjkbaxcoi;NJKLHNOIJ;HBUOJ;FKBJ!

thats my ANGER!

now im going to go enjoy chapter 3. JUST SO YOU KNOW, IT MADE ME LAUGH SOOOOOO HARD! YOU. ARE. BRILLIANT!!!! I AM SO JEALOUS OF YOUR TALENT!

*claps for you!*

Author's Response: We all seem to have in common highly annoying siblings i see...

Reviewer: Fire Of The Phoenix
Date: 03/12/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

OMG OMG OMG! I love Voldy fics, they make me laugh so much! Well done, very nicely pulled off!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Babyllama1
Date: 02/25/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

I like the charm thing, it was very good.

Author's Response: Oh..k great...thanks!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 02/24/07 21:23
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

sorta confuffling but funy


Author's Response: Glad to know the story was funny but I have mixed reactions at the fact that the story was "confuffling" too... ;)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 02/24/07 21:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

soo funny!


Author's Response: Short and sweet...thank you so much! And it's always great to find new readers especially who have such HP like alliterated names!

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 02/24/07 20:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

Once again, a very good chapter. The only thing is that Tonks's name is Nymphadora and not Nephridia.

Wow, I can't believe that McGonagall is going to be a grandmother! I can't see her as a grandmother-ly sort of person...Well, I guess if anybody can pull it off, you can!

Author's Response: ummm Nephridia was kept for humour...if you notice then in the whole chapter McGonagall was referring to Tonks with different names...all except Nymphadora..I thought I'd made that clear..?

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 02/24/07 20:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Wormtail is "dumpy"??? Wow, that is so deep! Kidding :)

I LOVE THE WORD DUMPY! YAY YOU FOR USING THAT WORD!

It made me laugh when Voldemort was saying that he was tall, green, and handsome, and also when you were describing the way Wormtail sounded because of the Infedilius charm. I also cracked up when I read #4 on the list of trains, The Voldemort's Scary Horcrux Cave Express...Hee hee!

Great first chapter!

Author's Response: New reader! New reader! *does dance ritual* Hmm you pointed some new things which you found funny in chapter one. Even I loved mermish! Dumbledore can speak it...imagine how it'd sound!

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 02/24/07 3:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

Bwahahahahahahahaha...!

There can be no worse fate for Lord Voldemort!
Good chapter. Keep churning them out.

Author's Response: Aah Zoheb....my sincerest reader! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter...ah wait there is too much fun planned ahead..and oboy I think I'll have to start work on the next chapter, lazy me!

Reviewer: Lizveta Renfield
Date: 02/22/07 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

oh my! voldy and trelawney! too horible to think about, but certainly comical! Can't wait to read what happens next. will be on the look out for the next chapter.

Author's Response: A new reader! And who said magic doesn't exist! In a week's time you'll have your chapter!

Reviewer: Lizveta Renfield
Date: 02/22/07 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

not as funny as the last two, but still entertaining.

Author's Response: Ah well, it's about the choices. Like I found them funny in the order 4..3..2..1. But it's really reader specific: what kind of humour they prefer - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lizveta Renfield
Date: 02/22/07 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

wonderful. the dementor tie- in continues to keep me in stitches. on to chapter 3.

Author's Response: Hmm demenotors...you cleverly paid attention to a very inconspicious part of the chapter...don't worry we'll see the couple again!

Reviewer: Lizveta Renfield
Date: 02/22/07 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Great! Can't wait for chapter 2

Author's Response: Everyone seems to like chapter 1, though I found it rather immature...looks like I'll have to revert to my old style again...the ridiculous and the wordy makes a great combination though, if you don't believe me, read Sliding Drawers by Loup_Garou

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 02/21/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

if it wasn't before, ridiculousness is definitely a word now! :D

~emoprincess26

Author's Response: Ha ha, I've made a new word! Listening, Oxforders?

Reviewer: Koukkujalka
Date: 02/21/07 3:30
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

More of this!

Author's Response: Surely...ah well they say "Brevity is the soul of wit!"

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 02/20/07 21:15
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

First of all, I loved how everyone got their own nickname (Professor "Photosynthetic-boyfriend" Sprout - though I may have really liked that one just because I'm a self-proclaimed biology dork) The tap dancing to lose wait was hilarious, especially since Molly fell for it, and Ron's Fun Corner made me sit here laughing and caused my mother asked me what was wrong with me. :D I can't wait to find out what the effects of Voldemort drinking the love potion will be, and Trelawney in a hula outfit? oh my... not sure that's a visual I want. And I don't have anything to criticize. Sorry!

~emoprincess26

Author's Response: Oh my, thanks so mych emoprincess. This the longest review a reader has ever written me and I'm so glad you liked the nicknames. I know sometimes I get wacky like Shakira and hula outfits and stuff - the but the randomness and ridiculousness (is that a word?) of it all is just too attractive a humour device to neglect!

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