Reviewer: zamora
Date: 08/13/07 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

lol this is really.... funny =P

Reviewer: zamora
Date: 08/13/07 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

lol this is really.... funny =P

Reviewer: zamora
Date: 08/13/07 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

lol dude this was halerious i love it! but then ofcourse i love basically every thing u wrote

Reviewer: zamora
Date: 08/12/07 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Think of it, a tall, green, handsome…'



'..bald…'

lol this is pretty funny..... one of my friends were like wat if some one just became a death eater so that they can mess up voldys life... anyway this is pretty funny i read it to my lil brother he laughed... alot... but maybe its because hes seven and hes in this weird laughing stage... all in all this is funny

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/11/07 11:23
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 3...Antidotes and Other Plans...

9/10. It was good. thats all I can think to say. Other than the fact Stephen Colbert Jumps to my mind in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for scoring all the chapters...no one usually does that...there really isn't a better quantitative method to guage how well/badly received the story is. Much obliged. My apologies, I live in India and have absolutely no idea who Stephen Colbert it. Do guide me though!

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/11/07 11:15
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

9/10...disturbing...thoughts...rushing...to...mind...unwillingly...must...not...think them!
Good chapter!

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/09/07 20:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

9/10. Its better if you ask me. Change everything to 'ear, 'ear, instead of hear, hear. I don't know. for the past week(almost literally, hour for hour) I've been listening to PotterCast and LeakyMug tonight.

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/09/07 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

8/10. Not sure why it's lower, but, well, my inner critic tells me to do so. Send you complaints to...uhh...?...someone other than me.

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/09/07 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Hmm...Images of He-Who-Has-Died-And-Used-To-Not-Be-Not-Named in Boxers are very desturbing...I'm surprised they let the authors note through. 8.5/10

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 08/09/07 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Hmm...Images of He-Who-Has-Died-And-Used-To-Not-Be-Not-Named in Boxers are very desturbing...I'm surprised they let the authors note through. 8.5/10

Reviewer: viva_lee
Date: 08/09/07 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

'Lemme guess,' said Wormtail boredly, 'Accio Nagini,'



oh my, i laughed out loud at this part. i woke up my dog cuz i laughed so hard. ithis is a really hilarious story so far

Reviewer: viva_lee
Date: 08/09/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

'Lemme guess,' said Wormtail boredly, 'Accio Nagini,'



oh my, i laughed out loud at this part. i woke up my dog cuz i laughed so hard. ithis is a really hilarious story so far

Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 22:23
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 3...Antidotes and Other Plans...

heehee............. xD Funny crap.

Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem…Part 2...Lovelorn…

hehe... voldie like 'oldie' as i call trelawney.

Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 1...Gate-crashing and Other Issues...

DRAMA! O.O
Haha.. Voldie is funny. ^.^ =3

Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Hahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this is funny. xDDD

Reviewer: The_Weied_Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 4:14
Chapter: Chapter 3: Marital Mayhem...Part 3...Antidotes and Other Plans...

lol this is funny

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 06/27/07 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

*laughs* *really, really hard*

Hehe, this was really funny! I especially liked the part when Voldemort calls Wormtail dumpy. That was a hoot! Very cleverly written. I really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: thank you very much! insincere and insensitive though i have been with updating, you are rest assured that i shall post the next chapter(s) very soon!

Reviewer: SevenAndMoreToGo
Date: 06/13/07 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Plan in Process...

Oh my...all you beautiful readers!!!

Daddy's back! Finally! After his painful four-month long writer's block! Back to square one, after thinking his life could also be COOL like all non-fanfickers, but was so wrong because his love really was in making you wonderful people laugh!!

I'm back friends, HUG ME!! *opens arms*

Reviewer: 62442suffell
Date: 06/03/07 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Scars, Families and Unbreakable Vows...

Strange!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry. I understand that my non-updatin is STRANGE...sniff....though this Strangeness shall BE OVERCOME!!! *Light shines all around*

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