Reviewer: Kait
Date: 01/11/05 14:20

Hmmmm. Bit toooo random for me, and I am the Ruler of Random, Sister of Strange, Empress of Eccentric.... yeah, you get the picture. It's also quite hard to follow, so try and paragraph a little more... wow, how picky do I sound?! ; )

Reviewer: OdDsbOdIkInS
Date: 01/11/05 14:17
Chapter: PART ONE

Cool i liked it i wanna go read the next chappie so bye

Reviewer: Atarwyn
Date: 01/11/05 11:05

Harry with a soprano vioce?!? Hahahaha! That's great! The part with Hagrid was wrong on many levels! but I liked the rest of it!! 10/10!

Reviewer: Avian020391
Date: 01/11/05 6:12

Excellent random humour! My sister didn't appreciate it, but she is 18. When you're 18, anything that isn't comparible to Wodehouse (she claims for hilarity, I claim for a lot of useless words) is branded as 'stupid', so don't listen to her. The point is to make people laugh, which this story is VERY GOOD AT. My sister is over my shoulder spouting scornful comments like 'that didn't make me laugh' while I endlessly spite her in this review. She still, however, thinks I am an annoying bug, but I'm now just ranting (now she calls me and annoying ranting bug and...oh forget it, this must sound like such a crazy review. I wouldn't be surprised if people think I'm schizophrenic).

Reviewer: HermioneG
Date: 01/10/05 12:50


Reviewer: Rochelle77
Date: 01/09/05 19:24

What's with the obession w/ llamas? I thought it was great! GREEN! And I call Ron my sexy beast all of the time, so it was awesome seeing it here. Update soon, -Tibby

Reviewer: Lil_bouncin_ferret
Date: 01/09/05 18:20

yah man word to the llama!!!

Reviewer: Lil_bouncin_ferret
Date: 01/09/05 18:20

yah man word to the llama!!!

Reviewer: patronus_star101
Date: 01/08/05 20:49
Chapter: PART ONE

It was awsomely funny...especialy the green poem

Author's Response: lol thanks, it just popped into my head one day and since ron is a "totally random person" why not put it in there! lol

Reviewer: hermione_soccer_redhead
Date: 01/08/05 20:41
Chapter: PART ONE

Out Ragously Funny...Best Humor About Ron Yet!

Author's Response: OMGosh thanks! thats awesome that you think that! i will try and post tomorrow but homework + busy schedule = not much spare time, for all my readers, thanks, and ill try and post soon

Reviewer: Weasley_is_our_king
Date: 01/08/05 19:02

sorry, but the story's getting worse! i agree it needs a Llama!!! LLAMAS ROCK!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: QueenJKP
Date: 01/08/05 11:34
Chapter: PART ONE

This story is rather good! I enjoyed it. It has some flaws, but overall it is entertaining. Will everyone who is talking about her getting tips from me and Juicy please just shut up? I know who you all are, I have seen you around the site, and I am not particulerly fond of any of you!

Author's Response: OMG! thanks you sooo sooo sooo much! im not very fond of "them" please u ppl pleez shut it...thanks queen!

Reviewer: redheadlover
Date: 01/07/05 21:18

haha that's great!!! I like Ron too!! ... the whole Hagrid thing kind of freaked me out... yeah... 10!

Reviewer: Lil_bouncin_ferret
Date: 01/07/05 20:37

hahah green? mind if i borrow that. your story would be perfect but it doesnt have a bloody llama. work on that.

Reviewer: RUme
Date: 01/07/05 20:18
Chapter: PART ONE

This story is soooo stupid! It hurt my eyes! QueenJKP is a brilliant author and so is Juicey Couture. I completley agree with the people who said that you should get tips from them! This story is soo boring!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 01/07/05 16:36
Chapter: PART TWO

That last 1 was bloddy funnie! plz update soon!

Reviewer: BlackRidingHood
Date: 01/07/05 12:45
Chapter: PART ONE

Dude, know what you are going threw with the flamers. I once wrote a Soul Caliber 2 fanfic and i had people telling me that it sucks and they want to shove the story up my arse and junk like that. Ignore them, if they're foolish enough to insult you because they don't like your story then your to good for them. I like the part were Ron called Harry cutie...Sounds like Ron is going nuts!

Reviewer: Voldie
Date: 01/06/05 20:18
Chapter: PART TWO


Reviewer: Aqua
Date: 01/06/05 17:55
Chapter: PART TWO

please write more. PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: THANKS! the story is finished, ill post asap! im also working on another story...

Reviewer: Sweetstuff24127
Date: 01/06/05 15:45
Chapter: PART ONE

The story sounds like it will get interesting. Don't listen to all of those bad reviews, the story is really good!! :)

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