Reviewer: HagridsTheMan
Date: 03/08/08 15:47
Chapter: PART FOUR

Well, that was a funny story, but I was a little disappointed that we didn't find out that Ron was under some kind of spell or something that was making him act so odd. But it was funny. And let's just hope for everybody's sake that Ron and Malfoy don't go through with this marriage....

Reviewer: HagridsTheMan
Date: 03/08/08 15:35

My only comment for this chapter is that Ron should NOT write poetry. Haha. ;)

Reviewer: HagridsTheMan
Date: 03/08/08 15:24
Chapter: PART TWO

Well, this is very odd. Is there really something wrong with Ron that we're going to find out about? I guess I'll have to keep reading.... I do love Ron's Wednesday shirt. And he should grow a beard like Dumbledore's--though that might not be the best way to get

Reviewer: TimeturnerBabe
Date: 03/01/08 20:51
Chapter: PART ONE

God you hoped so wrong! This story is so stupid! It makes no sense and is wrong in every waY! If you ever want to wrte again, don't.

Reviewer: Witchygirl11
Date: 01/26/08 21:25

it waz kinda confusing

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/18/07 18:42
Chapter: PART FOUR

I'm sorry but I must be frank. Are you mentally disturbed?

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/18/07 18:38

this is wicked funny (although frankly I find pars of it disturbing)

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/18/07 18:34
Chapter: PART TWO

"October 25th
Tonight I was in the common room and I was kind of drowsy. (I’ve been studying a lot). I saw a really cute girl sitting on the couch all by herself. I went over and sat close to her and then I put my arm around her. Then I said ‘Hey cutie.’ She stared at me and kept staring. She never said anything. I moved away from her a little. When I looked back over at her I saw…HARRY! (yes, Harry, Harry Potter) I blinked and then I was Harry again! Blink- Harry, Blink- Harry, Blink- Harry, Blink- Harry, Blink- Harry, Blink- Harry! I suddenly realized that was no girl–it was Harry! I screamed! I kept screaming. I was horrified. I screamed some more. Then I went and sat in the corner rocking back and forth, whimpering like and insane person. “Ron, are you okay?” Harry said to me completely cool. He wasn’t the least bit bothered. I looked up, my eyes grew wide. “It’s okay, mate, just PLEASE, don’t ever do that again, please,” He said. “Do you need to go see Madam Pomfrey?” he continues on. “NO!…Yeah,” I replied."-this part here is very funny.if you wrote the entire thing like this you would get a quicksilveer quill for sure.

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/18/07 18:30
Chapter: PART ONE

this is very interesting. the part about the letter from the muggle agencie is very interesting.

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/08/07 19:54
Chapter: PART TWO

ummm, okay.. this is weird.. i'll read ahead, maybe that will explain a few things.

Reviewer: unexplainablle
Date: 08/20/07 16:08
Chapter: PART FOUR


Reviewer: pandora123
Date: 05/29/07 2:37
Chapter: PART FOUR

that was one of those things you don't see everyday....

Reviewer: pandora123
Date: 05/29/07 2:32

that green poem is quite random

Reviewer: LadyElyssa
Date: 04/12/07 20:14
Chapter: PART FOUR

Very funny!

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 01/09/07 17:54
Chapter: PART FOUR

A very random story.

Reviewer: RonsPisces
Date: 10/21/06 17:53
Chapter: PART FOUR

This is funny although I think you should put it in the same-sex pairings category.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 09/16/06 20:38
Chapter: PART FOUR

OMG! That was hysterical! Write more!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 09/02/06 22:40
Chapter: PART FOUR

uhh.. bit confusing and random,but 7/10

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 08/12/06 15:33

I'm in the library reading this and soooo embarrassed. There are several people on the computers around me and evrey time I snort with laughter and clamp my hand over my mouth, they give me weird looks. God, I'm sooooo embarrassed. It's not good for a fairly hot thirteen year old with a great sense of fashion who's dressed in a sexy top and just got a manicure to show signs of insanity in public. Please reduce the ridiculousness in your story!!! It's making me lose my name of third hottest girl in FHS.

Reviewer: silverpluto
Date: 06/11/06 21:28
Chapter: PART FOUR

This story was very random. I don't think I have ever read a fanfiction where the characters were more OOC.

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