I LOVED IT! :D
It wasn't like anything I'd ever read. Poor Hermione. :(
6 out of 10
but a little to perverted
maybe for a gothic virgin
but other than that the story line
wait a minute their both 15??
oh dear .... what the hell I'll pretent their in their seventh year
i love how u bring out this story
I love the way you have the character of Hermione, I mean all her courage and smartness is still there but at the same time she is only human, falling into the bowels of pleasure. great chapter
I think im going to like this story
im sorry, but that was just a totally crap way to end it. I wasnt expecting a 'happy ending' but atleast more than that!!! Other then that loved the series and will read all of yours.Aly xx
I just read this whole story (my eyes are rather tired now :P) and I must say, it's great. Well written, unique plotline...I like it :] Good job.
at first i was like: yeah sure its just some typical raping smut, etc... after i read it i was like: O.O woah...
ok, Queen of Serpents, I LOVE this. Although, I thought it was a little sick in the biginning, but then I got to the end of part-one, and I can not WAIT until I read the next part!!
I have a few words 4 ya, KEEP ON WRITING!! UR REALLY GOOD AT IT!!
SO SAD. I'm BAWLING HERE!
gosh that last bit there, could feel a tear burning up in my eye *sniff* *chuckle*
Oh my god! What is wrong with her?! Malfoy must have done some seriously twisted things to her!!! This is well written but...ugh.
beautifully written. terrifying but so... real.
I hope they would either get on with it & get together in the future Great read! Somehow makes one want to see beyond this last chapter!
wow. I just read this for the first time and it was amazing. dark yes, but amazing non the less. it was so well written I felt like I was in each scene. really, kudos to you. it was sooo good. (oh and ill just add this. I've temporary at least 5 times. its really really good. I love it.)