I FEEL SO BAD FOR HERMIONE! Why in the muggle world did he have to rape her?
good . even better , a new pov .
even more epic than the first . wow .
very epic . very well depicted . a lotta talent where that came from .
I love the end!!
you wrapped it up nicely. It just makes me more curious about how you're going to continue the story. I'm definitely still going to read on
I'm reading on!
har har it's too good to stop now
"Oh yes, like Curly Pimple! No wait that doesn't sound right. Oh wait it's Shirely. Shirely Temple. "
lol i laughed out loud.
Anywho, what a powerful chapter. Yay draco has a conscience. Your words conveyed his feelings well and i could feel his guilt and pain
wow, very powerful.
i like how you give Draco some human emotions as well instead of making him a cardboard cutout villian
you are a beautiful writer. Even though this is a rape story, you make it very emotional and not trashy. kudos. i'm looking forward to reading more
This is a really good story and it's very well weitten. I love it besides the fact that someone got raped. You did Hermione perfactly in the story. She's all tough and everything at the end and I like it. I also like Draco in it, but only when he apologized. I also like how he was upset that he did that. If he wasn't, then I probably would have stoped reading it. I really like how she was in control at the end too.You did a very good job and I really like this story!
I have to say that i think this ending would have been better than having it end at chap 9, but I now have to read the next chaptr so i will just say that this fanfic is great, and leave it at that. The emotions are excellent! You really feel for both Hermione and Draco in this, it's great.
omg! i totally loved this story....in a weird way....lol! you need to do another chapter or something continuing!
that was such a good story. are you gonna do follow up just so we know what happened to them. it's only fair.
interesting. but good
I LOVED IT! :D
It wasn't like anything I'd ever read. Poor Hermione. :(
6 out of 10
but a little to perverted
maybe for a gothic virgin
but other than that the story line