This story, I had found it intriguing, but after I finished, it's just, sick, mental, and I'm completely digusted. I don't know why or how I feel, or how I am feeling disgusted. For that alone, I must congratulate you on your story, admire your work of art, because that's what it is, art. Undescribable, irreplaceable, and interpreted in many different ways, in many different emotions. Congratulations.
That was a well-written story. A bit confusing in parts, but altogether good.
So intense! This is a really good story so far...
This story is great. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. If people say that it's sick and you need help then that's their problem. Rape happens and yes, it's not a happy thing. But this story is one of the most addicting ones I've read in a while. Keep writing, you really have a talent!
I agree with your disclaimer. No-one is better than Draco Malfoy, but this story just makes him seem evil. He's not evil, he's mean, confused,loving, caring, and much better then that Potter bloke.
o.m.g. He has a soul.
How the hell can you write so good?!
Its hard to write stuff like this and make it realistick. You must lnow a lot about rape and abuse.
But it's good.
i love this truly amzing goodnight u awesome writer.
lemme know if u have any other dramione stories.
wow i love it
omgod! this is amazing u truly have a gift. i think ur better than stephanie meyer. dont u ever stop with ur amazing writing, i am just so speechless
I liked this story alot but it makes Hermione into a monster that she is not. It was very well written and interesting, an awesome plot but it gave a bad and false impression of Hermione.
I liked this story alot but it makes Hermione into a monster that she is not. It was very well written and interesting, an awesome plot but it gave a bad and false impression of Jermione.
ohhhh i love draco here he is soooo amazing
graet story. i like your way of writting
that is good
i like this chapter
Wow, this story was so good! I usually dont like reading fan fics with more than 2 chapters but i just couldn't stop. The characters and the way they reacted in these situations were very believeable. This is the first dark fanfic i've read as i usually like happy endings but this had a better plot than any of those and it would have been insane for this story to end happily. Well done!
wow.. a very.. um intense story.. its grt tho, that u wrote it, i understand that u dont support rape n i thnk im gettng the msg ur tryng to giv.. it was a frightening story actualli, bt a good one. i jus didnt like ron n harry's roles.. bt thats to be expectd i gues, aftr all, in all the books theyr the good guys.. bt well done!
All in all, I loved it! The grammar errors were a bit of a turn off, and in a place or two (maybe) I thought that you might have been laying it on a bit thick, but the storyline and depth was amazing.
Thanks for writing, and whatever you do, don't stop!
dude, what is this? It's like watching a car crash or bunnies set on fire. WTF?