Even though this story didn't have a happy ending this was the perfect ending for this story. It was truly a great story full of sadness and pain, which is one of the reasons I liked this story so much. You have a gift for writing.
I loved it!
It's so great.
I actually have to admit to have cried, and been mad, and having all these mixed emotions that the characters had throughout the story. I was really able to connect with them on some level, and it was just AWESOME!
you did a great job and should be very proud.
it was awsome, i loved this story...
i totally love this story, ur a great writer, the way u organize the ideas is great, if someday u deside to write a book tell me, ill be happy to read it.....And of course im gonna read the second part, i love this..... : )
Crud, I thought she was going to get away...
You mean more contorvercial than what he did in details that should be rated tipple X even though their not (this ought to be eye poping ;)
Or perhaps the more disturbibg plot line that she's fallen into some kind of /lust love twisted Stockhom syndrome
And yes I read the warning about rape but this one needs a warning for absolutly creepy. Please tell me he gets something of what he deserves and she gets some kind of therapy and her head put back on strait. And of course most will continue readin they have to know
And has anyone said theirs something wrong with you very wrong with you ;) but you write so well
I think it was excelent.
Your story is awesome! Really good, bravo! It ended pretty sad too.
love it love it love it how do u write so good man i need lessones bad
it's good i like it.
is ch 14-so an so come soon?
if so can't wate to read it:)
will like i sad i love it :D
i love it, i love it, i love it!!!!!!
the perfect soundtrack.
Wow like wow this is a really good story its just like omg its good
its very scary
omg that was totally awsome....morbid...but awsome!!!
Two words: completely riviting. You are an amazing writer, and I hope nothing stops you in the days to come. Write your heart out girl. Keep on keepin' on :DD
I love the reather ambiguos ending and I have to wonder what happens next. This was really wonderful in a very dark way. You are a great author.
WOW that is all i can say