I really thought she would get away. Damn!
despite the rape and the torture that they both caused each other, i loved every word of it.i also love the fact that its not your typical happily ever after story.it was more realistic...to me at least.to have such want and addiction.
anyway, i loved it and one of the best i've ever read.thanks for creating such story. :]
Wow! this was great! Amazing writing, good job!
That was some sick shit.......but I'm extremely turned on and pleased. Thanks for putting so much work into it...turned out well.
wow...just WOW...amazing storyyy...honestli....i read it LONG time ago buh nah the ending....u ended it beautifully....sadly...buh beautifulii...u have an AWESOME riting style...u shud be damn proud of urself!!!....GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!....loved ittt!@@
omg, i read all of it and i loved it and im like omg...........its so great!
ooh poor hermione
Wow, realy descriptive. and it made me feel like i was hermione
Very tragic, but strangely intriguing. You portray the characters real good. You'd usually think Hermione would have a little more spunk, but you show her in a very vulnerable way. It takes skill to write like that.
i love the story.
i think the authoress should keep in mind all the plots & sub-plots in the real story to give hers a more real feel.
Wow. I love this chapter.
Very well written. Awsome job.
Excellent, but i was rather bummed with the way it ended.
but very good story.
very disturbing but i have to give the author credit because it does keep you awake and wide eyed and i can easily say that with a change of subject this author has a future
This was an absolutely fantastic story! I was completely moved by the plotline and became ingrossed in reading after just a few short minutes. Your portrayal of Hermionie and Draco's pain, longing, desperation, guilt, and fear was superb! I actually cried at one point! You truly are an incredible writer!
Damnit! Damnit! Why would you...how could you just leave me like that...I want more...I need more:( Please...its an addiction now!!! darn it...oh well well it was good while it lasted....keep it real!
BTW I love your story temporary too (Y) Yes!