I actually feel sorry for him. How can I after all he's done! But I still wish they end up together! Please, don't kill me for that!! ;)
What a turn off!!
I'm going to cry. It's like it's really happening. Wow!
I really thought she would get away. Damn!
despite the rape and the torture that they both caused each other, i loved every word of it.i also love the fact that its not your typical happily ever after story.it was more realistic...to me at least.to have such want and addiction.
anyway, i loved it and one of the best i've ever read.thanks for creating such story. :]
Wow! this was great! Amazing writing, good job!
That was some sick shit.......but I'm extremely turned on and pleased. Thanks for putting so much work into it...turned out well.
wow...just WOW...amazing storyyy...honestli....i read it LONG time ago buh nah the ending....u ended it beautifully....sadly...buh beautifulii...u have an AWESOME riting style...u shud be damn proud of urself!!!....GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!....loved ittt!@@
omg, i read all of it and i loved it and im like omg...........its so great!
ooh poor hermione
Wow, realy descriptive. and it made me feel like i was hermione
Very tragic, but strangely intriguing. You portray the characters real good. You'd usually think Hermione would have a little more spunk, but you show her in a very vulnerable way. It takes skill to write like that.
i love the story.
i think the authoress should keep in mind all the plots & sub-plots in the real story to give hers a more real feel.
Wow. I love this chapter.
Very well written. Awsome job.
Excellent, but i was rather bummed with the way it ended.
but very good story.