This story was sadistic, lust driven and WONDERFUL! Congratulations on a story well writ!
Wow! Great, .... I just don't know what to say. Rape, misery only added more spice to this story. I want you write sequel. I really want you to. its not like other peachy lovey dovey story, this story have a real heart piercing pain, lust, hate......even love. In a sequel
that story was amazing. i cant even describe how beautiful it was.
brilliant! fucking awesome!! your an amazing author! srry didn't review on the other chapters but i was to busy hitting the next button:):) well ive said what i had 2 say so keep up the amazing work:):):) byeeexxx
okay, i have a few things to say to you,
first, this is a great story, you are a wonderful writer
second, this is also a twisted twisted story,its insane
third, i didnt like the ending but it wasnt bc it wasnt well written, but im a romantic and a very kid like person meaning i hate violence, hate, and rape
any way awesome story even if its not my taste and really twisted
im on chapter 8, and ill keep reading until the very end, its so good, you are really a very good writer
i really liked this. it was an intresting shift of power that seemed to keep popping up and roles being reversed of who was in control. nicely done
This fic has done that which very few fics have done. It made me feel for the characters; it has made me cry. For that I applaud you. You have a talent you shouldn't waste.
Really nice intro!
u know what? this story is so true, and happens everyday. i've been in a similar situation minus the rape and abuse. so i can definite understand it. wow. very well written. i'll be thinking about this for a while.
This was really good!! You should seriously think about getting something published, you have amazing talent!
Did he get 10 years/months mixed up or did you do it to make him sound crazy?
i have no idea how this has so many favourites. the idea of this story alone is horrifying. even suggesting that hermione wants to have her rapist around is so offensive. i have a feeling you don't understand what rape is at all because this story is absolutely disgusting.
a very deep story, but i liked it! it kept you hungering for more, and gave new depth for both characters.
love the story
This story, I had found it intriguing, but after I finished, it's just, sick, mental, and I'm completely digusted. I don't know why or how I feel, or how I am feeling disgusted. For that alone, I must congratulate you on your story, admire your work of art, because that's what it is, art. Undescribable, irreplaceable, and interpreted in many different ways, in many different emotions. Congratulations.
That was a well-written story. A bit confusing in parts, but altogether good.
So intense! This is a really good story so far...
This story is great. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. If people say that it's sick and you need help then that's their problem. Rape happens and yes, it's not a happy thing. But this story is one of the most addicting ones I've read in a while. Keep writing, you really have a talent!