this was the GREATEST story ever, yah?? u go gal!
GREAT i don't really liek fluffy endings and that was far from fluffy
you kept repeating the line they loved to take delight in their pain.
clever see ya!
finally good on ye hermione now go out with either ron or harry okay!
okay i will leave a review and continue reading happy?
okay good it seems draco is her prisoner
good as always do i need to repeat?
hey i shall keep reading i really feel sorryf for hermione she lost harry and ron and will she become friends with them again?
yeah a simple confession and you know Hermione can't do it you've broken her draco broken her and no reparo is going to mend her.
okay draco youve had your fun and i know u feel sorry 4 her but you now need to tell someone.
sorry i don't leave a comment like my others but you get the idea!
finally now mione go or you'll always be alone waiting for him.
oh don't think like that mione
okay good i love it okay i love how youve described this story so well but feel sorry for mione.
yeah and you should malfoy!
great story and finally he feels regret guilt maybe now is the time hermoine should go to a professor?
well i'll just have to read this very well writen story and find out!
poor mione
i love how you describe this story so well it really makes you sorry for hermione and hate draco more.
thats pure evil draco no wonder voldy took you as a death eater.
good you described it so well poor mione.
Hermione run from him he's evil!
( the author is brilliant and brave good wrting)
thats sick draco
(not meaning any offence to the author your brilliant!)
and brave to write that!
It's pretty good. I love how you make it long cause i hate reading it quickly and then there's no more to read.
I reallllllly like this story... I come back again & again to read it... I think you've done a most awesome job!!! Though I think it's funny that our names are very similar... Please take no offense. I didn't copy it from you... Although it is new again on here...
Wow!! i read the whole story from prolouge to epilouge in one sitting!! I must say that this was amazingly different, that gave it its allure!! Even though i have not been in that situation (thankfully) i still found myself sympathising with both Hermione and Draco! Your characterisation of Draco was amazing. Someone so beautiful and heavenly containing pure carnivorous evil!! Its that binary opposition that is amazing ... no wonder he trapped Hermione!!
You are a true writer!! Only a proper story tell would be able to take such a controversial and horrid act such as rape and make the reader look upon it in a different light, not only as a horrid act but as a catalyst. A catalyst for pure emotion and confusing situations.
Amazing story! Beautifully crafted! I would love to read more of your work!!
Riveting. Violently riveting, and yet beautiful. This is a part of human beings not usually shown in writing, and yet you captured it perfectly. Congratulations. and thanks for your words.
