ok i loved 1-9 im sorry u should have left it at azkaban i do however find hermiones dark side intreaguing in fact it inspired me to write a story of my own
Oh my god. I am sooo confused, and that was suppost to be the ending. AHHHHH! I still loved it, you had me the entire thing
This whole thing can not, WILL NOT work out between them. They are just sooo crazy, both should go see therapists, like NOW!
My feelings for Draco had completely changed, and I praise you for it. It you remember my review for an early chapter, I wanted to call Draco all sorts of bad names, but now I want his chains to be set free.
I have read a lot about rape, and how it could effect you like it did Hermione. Draco could just be playing a big trick on her to make it so he gets to be free.
I just read your author's note too. I will definatly be continue reading, although that makes everything more obvious. One of my favorite things about a story is not knowing what is going to happen next, and now I am starting to get a clue. I hope you continue to through twists at us readers!
Draco should have included today's events too. And for once I believe Dumbledore was acting stupid. I agree maybe not calling the Aurors, but to let him go back to the common room where Hermione was, now that was stupid!
Tears are literally forming in my eyes. I have to read more, right now!
Just because he regets it now doesn't change the fact that he did it! I bet Pansy will go tell someone, and he will be sent to Askaban for doing it to her.
Draco is sooo many words that are too bad for a review. He is also a coward...but I really don't have time to explain,I MUST READ MORE
This chapter makes me want to cry. You write rape with so much detail, I hope you have not had to go through it. I want to stop reading, and keep myself from knowing the horrible things rape does to you, but I can not. I know this is only a fanfiction, but you are such a good writer, I can not help but think of it in terms of a real person.
Wow, great start. Hermione is such a strong person, and I just hope she will be able to deal with this. Your writing is beautiful, and I can't wait to read all of the chapters!
it was quite...nice,anyway...u hav talents for writing u noe?try writing sum stories like mysteries,adventures....u hav a bright future.jyjy
good wright I really enjoyed the ending...kinda leaves you on the edge of your seat...like you dont know what going to happen...it was a really awsome story!
im sorry to say that i didnt like the epilogue as much as the rest of the story,
dont get me wrong, its a fabulous storyline but i like good long entries and this was just a bit too short.
but i do like your imaginative story.
1. I like tea
2. I am more sexy than you
3. Transformers, robots in disguise
Nice!! i really like it so far keep up the good work
Awwwww poop hermione. it's so good that i actually really do feel sorry for her. good job :)