It was crazy, I know, but right now I don't care if I lost my sanity. It's quite normal among us Slytherins.
Of all the brilliant lines so far, this, by far, was the best. I even laughed, even though for the past half hour I've been cringing and telling myself feircly that this would never happen. It's hard to believe that though... I mean if they were in bedrooms only separated by a bathroom, then who knows what Malfoy would do.
No. Malfoy is sick but he wouldn't do that.
Hermione would tell immediately.
She's a human being. A girl. Being a witch doesn't change that - make her stronger or something.
She's smart! She could've cursed Malfoy into obvion by now!
Draco's strong....
And this... this is what my minds been saying. I shall leave a proper reveiw in some later chapter. For now, I'm arguing with my self and enjoying a thrilling story.
-Arianna.
Who may or may not be slightly schitzo.
well this was very different. and im thinking a good different. it was intense and descriptive & it really pulled you into the story. i really liked the separate point of view thing. you could view the story from two different aspects which i really enjoyed. you really are a great writer - keep up the amazing work.
:)
sucks he has to go to askaban, but i really shouln't feel bad?
i wish they could just be together, but then it would be like every other story.
and i like how you change things up, so i'll deal.
good, im glad he feels guilty! he deserves it.
a little cruel and intense but i knew what i was getting my self into by readding it. i really love how descriptive you are and you really know how to grasp the readers attention. =)
Good story. Bit disappointed by the ending tho.
we should be best buddies cause no one can beat draco!!!
That was awesome and I don't think that you need any therapy sessions at all. But why did you have to insert the fact that Draco found his guilt and told Dumbledore. It;s okay to find his guilt but Azkaban was just too much. I LOVED it, cause there's no musshy stuff. You rock, girl :-)
ok... little confusing ending... is draco gonna die???
i liked the story... but i didnt... i mean it was a good story but i thought they actually loved eachother.... they were actually going to end up together....
but NOOOO they had to go on not loving each other just taking advantage and hurting? well thats the reason i didnt like it but thats just my personal opinion other than that goood job
I think she likes him. I mean if he's going to be more nicer about it when she's actually cooperating, then she should cooperate. It would make the pain go away. You know?
Wow. That was like freakishly evily awesomely good. AWESOME JOB!!
omg thats sad! =[ im gonna keep reading... i hope they end up together!!
omg thats sad! =[ im gonna keep reading... i hope they end up together!!
This is brilliant writing....even though perhaps disturbing in a way. I think you captured perfectly both the hopelessness that a rape victim would feel and the insanity that goes through the mind of the rapist. I never would have expected Draco to be THAT cruel, causing me to thoroughly enjoy the story at this point and want to read on.
ok i loved 1-9 im sorry u should have left it at azkaban i do however find hermiones dark side intreaguing in fact it inspired me to write a story of my own
