woahh this chapter was intense, but very well written.
this story was so powerful. i wouldnt say i enjoyed it, but how can you enjoy a story about the rape of an innocent girl?
it was so captivating, so much thought and meaning was put into every sentence and paragraph that i felt i was hermione, then i was draco depending on the pov.
anyway, amazing story, keep writing
xxxx
Truth is, I've never read a Hermione/Draco before. I have no idea why I came on...something in me was curious...and now it's 2:45 in the morning and my irresistible hunger has been satisfied. And I thank you.
wow this is the most amazing story I've ever read and the ending befits it perfectly. it is such a good representation of the bigger picture
WOW! That is a very powerful story but i loved it!
Wow.
Thats really all I can say...
I think the thought process and emotians of the characters were very good. Although I thought that sometimes the heaviness of the rape was slightly understated... if that makes sense. Like in this line in Ch. 11:
"The weird part is, I don't understand why I'm feeling bad for it at all. I mean sure I raped her"
It seemed pretty insensitive... even though a lot of the story was showing that Draco actually has a heart. But...anyway...
Good story!
read it .. hated it .. sorry and it makes me sick people who enjoy this =S first off you have no idea what rape is about and to post it on a site for people to see and read and learn from!! yr making fantacey and some people tend to act apon them do your self a favour, use your talents to make people happy with good storys not have JK's charaters be turned into what there not!! sorri you have talent n i hope you use it to make people happy for the right moral reasons! also i might add, no one enjoys rape no one!!! so to have it twisted for her to like it =S that would never happen! Belive me! so stop writing the rape fan fics =S its making people think its okay that eventuly the girl (or boy) will like it so just keep raping them! sorri i hav storng isuses with this and i had to say something, i have a right to speak what i think and i also think you are a great writer just use it to good use =) thank you
Wow, the mix of emotions was realy strange yet believable. I really liked this story despite the topic. Well done, a really good fic!
Wow, the mix of emotions was realy strange yet believable. I really liked this story despite the topic. Well done, a really good fic!
wow! *applause* that was one hell of a story.. and i mean it in a good way!bravo!
All Hail Queen of serpents!
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I don't know whos sicker you for writing this or me for reading it. but it was a great story.Kuddos
very heavy stuff! I have to say that even though i don't like the plot, the story itself is written well. Their hate and lust are palpable and makes the story stick in your mind. The content is mindblowing, and nteresting. Still, my praise, madam for an unconventional tale, well written and told.
You have manipulated the human physcee in a way I have never seen nor heard of. The greatest accomplishment though, and believe me, to be able to extract one from this story is an accomplishment in its self, is that I never once doubted that it was Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy having these feelings.
And now I'm going to use your words against you. Thanks for supporting me and I hope you go out and give one last review for Delightful Pain when it's over.
My dear, you have made it painfully clear that the Delightful Pain will never cease. I don't think Hermione will ever be in her right mind again, and I don't think that I will ever read the books without imagining her as hurt, frail, and on the brink of insanity. All the same, Draco will never be anything but a rapist. There is only one fiction which has left me with this opinion, and I will state it again as I have so many other places - Borderline, by MaiaMadness. Except I will never imagine Remus strait again.
You have delved into the inner workings of the human/wizard mind in such a way that you have questioned even my sanity. I have never felt, and my Godric I mean felt, such confusion in my life. The earlier reveiw I left is still true - I am arguing in my mind and have continuously been for the past two and a half hours. If I were to even begin to completely understand the reasons behind Hermione and Draco's actions I think I might just throw in the towl and enter myself into an insane asylum. Am I making my point clear? They [Hermione and Draco] were demented, yet perfectly able to funtcion, but never normaly. I have never read, nor gone through the emotions as well, about how a boy can decide, in a split moment of lust, to rape someone. I have never understood those reason behind such a terrible act, and even though you deny the reality of the outcome, I believe that it is completely possible.
I searched for this story so that I could leave a reveiw for an assignment over on the Beta boards. I daresay I found so much more than a good story to reveiw. You have succeded in making me question more than just the wizarding world. At first, during the (dissapointingly, I may add.) breif period when we see the 'evil' Draco, I thought you had to be demented yourself to be able to portray those feelings - those actions.
And it wasn't dissapointing because of the writing. Quite the contrary, I was so engrossed in the story at that point that I was looking forward to seeing that side of Draco. The side that was so perfectly believeable that I shuddered after nearly every sentence... No. Word.
Also, I'd like to say that I wouldn't dream of asking for a sequel. There is no need. You left many questions open, but I don't want them to be answered. Your story was obviously not about the Wizarding War - It was about the war between two enemies, and I firmly believe that they remained enemies, no matter the lust that resided between them. I doubted at moments whether your statement about their being in love was true (maybe around chapters five or six... I've been up too long. Thanks *le sigh*) but I was quickly proven wrong. They hated each other. And that hate is the kind of hate that would haunt a person for the rest of their life... and you have to be some kind of damn author to be able to make that impression.
Well, I promised a reveiw and it seems that I've blabbered on like a crazed fangirl. I have only one question... will you marry me? Queen or not, I think we'd make a nice pair :p
-Arianna
*stares at A/N*
Oh, that's promising. It's now two in the morning and I have to go to work at eleven. Damn you. Damn you all to hell. I don't think I've ever been more captivated by any story, and I'm nearly including the original Harry Potter books.
I will eventually say something about the actual story...
-Arianna
Tsk tsk. I really want to reveiw but that Next button is staring at me and I can not refuse it. Honestly, a good one will come. I planned on doing homework tonight, you know...
-Arianna
