Cool ending......... i really liked the plot even tho evil Draco isnt always my fave, it was well played out in this one!!
wow this was one hell of a story. i read it in about three hours, the whole thing. although there were some inconsistancies and grammatical errors i am willing to look past that b/c this was one hell of a story.
i think you should probably, if you haven't already, look into writing stories with your own characters. i think you would go far with that.
Very Strong. Love your style!
Very Strong. Love your style!
This is absolutely disgusting. You should be ashamed to write such a thing...but I like it. ;)
Aww....so sad....and awesome...that he feels regret. It's so cute when grown men cry.
...Draco's a bitch...but a hawt one.
Man, I really thought that she was going to get away...guess I was a bad guesser!
Wow, sad, but well-written.
This was an amazing story. A little graphic, yes, but amazing. It is very well written, and the plot twists are genius. A tragic ending to a phenomenal story. Great piece of writing you have here. Truly touching.
OMG parts of that made me cry!!! that was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!! You deffo the next jk Rowling..,......LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
This was a very difficult story to read, and I'm guessing here but I doubt whether it was particularly easy to write either. The psychological aspect of the situation was fascinating however, it reminded me of kidnap victims developing strange attachments to their captors and yet it was much more than that too. I'm not sure if the purpose of your story was the psychological implications, but that is what struck me most when reading.
ok... what a way to end a chapter... i hate u ... jk...
This story rocks!!!(I think poeple should put out more stories with those kind of details.)
I adore this story. I have it on my favorites and have read it several times. For some reason I do love the rape stories. I think they hold more... emotion. More mental battles and a bigger climax. Far more interesting in "He likes her. Will he tell her? Maybe one day." bullshit.
Real stories that could actually happen... if the wizarding world was actually true that is haha.
Brilliant story. Keep them up!!
Wow i remember when you started this story and i couldn't stomache it then the rape was to much but now that you finished it, it ran its course it is the perfect story, amazing you outdid yourself this time i always relish in your works they are always the best, i connected to this so deeply it was amazing my family called my square eyes for reading it and i didnt read it like i did on the 7 book read through just to finish it and find out what happened i read this to enjoy it
thank you and we do hail you
the Queen of Serpents!
your adoring fan
o.m.g. this was really good! yet sad....the ending was even more sad! i like Draco too! good job by the way!
i loved it....it was raw, kinky and full of passion....very good, keep up the stories if you can ^_^