Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/21/07 20:15
Chapter: Hermione Granger

Bookwormy! What a lovely surprise! This is quite an original and funny story, and I like the way that the name of the spell is the same as the shampoo that my mum uses. (Sorry, I'm random!)

Oh, gosh. Your versions of the Marauders are ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. My sides were splitting! How do you do it? "Which one of us is Wormtail?"

Your version of Remus was fantastic as well. I like the idea that he's aware of the fact that he's a dork and has accepted and embraced it. I can totally see him as that kind of guy.

Well, this is a good story, and I cannot wait to see how Ron's turn goes, being a big fan of his!

Author's Response:
OMG Schmergo!!! It's me who should be saying "what a lovely surprise"!!! I'm glad you like my fic...and dont worry, the name of the spell is actually inspired from my mum's nailpaint's company...ah it's copyright! I think I'm in trouble lol.

I dunno how I'm able to do the marauder-bit. Maybe I've been soo much into Harry Potter, that they've become a part of my life and so it's easy to write about someone you know so well! The wormtail bit is just a result of my hatred of him..grr...

The Remus-part. Hmm...he's a bit obsessed with studies and he knows that. I've made the maraduers completely true to their habits, like remus-study obsessed, padfoot-girl obsessed n so on..
I'm happy you liked my work. Just imagine!!!! Schmerg_The_Impaler!! the gr8est fan fic author in my opinion! Such an honour to be reviewed by you ^_^

Reviewer: Mrs_Voldy
Date: 04/21/07 19:13
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Very interesting. Its actually funny and amusing unlike some other stories in this area. Great work! I'm adding you to my favs hehe, just can't wait for the "Harry Potter" chapter, can't wait for the reactions of the maraders and what they say about him! Eeeekk!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you consider this fic so good. I'll try my best to do write a terrfic harry potter chapter, becuase that's what you all want to read most!! Thanks a lot for the review, Mrs_Voldy. P.S. How is it to be voldy's wife? scary? happy? nervous? Lol!

Author's Response:'re Indian it seems...and Punjabi too, am I rite? Yay! I'm Indian too

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 04/21/07 18:48
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

just read both chappies. bloomin brilliant. I like this one! I can't wait to read what the marauders advise on Harry on.

Author's Response: "Bloomin brilliant" wow what a cool phrase!!! I'm happy you like it. I'll do the 3rd chappie ASAP. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lily princess
Date: 04/21/07 16:09
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

update imediatly

Author's Response: *salutes* Yes, sir! eh..Yes, ma'am!

Reviewer: Starlight_maurader
Date: 04/21/07 16:04
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

This is so funny! You're doing such a good job!

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much! Glad to hear you people are liking it!

Reviewer: abnormie_girl2
Date: 04/21/07 14:51
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Wormtail is sooo clueless i mean omg anywho this was quite funny i especially liked padfoots parts :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the clueless-Wormtail part, because I've always thought him as a brainless prat!!! I just am not able to write anything good for him...ah, well. Thanks for the review, glad you liked the padfoot-part too. =D

Reviewer: CrazyChimp
Date: 04/21/07 14:00
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

haha, very nice update! now all we need is for sirius to mention a little somthing-something about harry and ginny next chapter. Great update!

Author's Response: Hmm...that's all I can say for the moment! Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked the update cuz I worked really hard on it.

Reviewer: OOTF gurl
Date: 04/21/07 13:52
Chapter: Hermione Granger

that was really cute can't wait for the next chapter great work

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 04/21/07 12:38
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Hi, I really liked your story, it's a brilliant idea to have the marauders give out advice. I, personally, am a great fan of Sirius, and I love reading about him as a relationship consultant. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for the review. I could think Sirius as a realtionship consultant only, because he had such a huge fan following in his school! Lol! I'm glad u like him as I've picturized him. I'll update ASAP. Thanks a lot for the review!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 04/21/07 11:21
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

This was funny. You might of over done it just a tad on Wormtail but I hate him so much that it doesn't matter. Padfoot was so prefect that it makes up for it anyways!
Update soon!

Author's Response: Wow. Everyone's been telling me I've done the wormtail-part! But I just don't seem to be able to control myself when it comes to the prat!! Ah I hate him soo soo much! I think he has no brains and that he deserves to die!! Ahem..sorry... I'm glad you liked the Padfoot part though!! I'll try to upadte ASAP. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: HP_GWRW_HG
Date: 04/21/07 10:59
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Can't wait!!! this story is one of my favorites....Update sooooonnnnnn.....

Author's Response: Yay!!!! Thanks for adding it to ur faves. My summer holidays are coming up soon so you can expect an update or two. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: The High Inquisitor
Date: 04/21/07 10:06
Chapter: Hermione Granger

The dialogue you expressed for each character was very accurate to their personalities. The extra power you gave the map worked well for the story, i liked it.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so happy you liked the characterization of the marauders. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: haz_gin_ron_herm12
Date: 04/21/07 9:11
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

please please please carry on ace so far

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reviewing! I'll defintely carry summer hols are going to start soon, so you can expect more updates!

Reviewer: Brunette Lily
Date: 04/21/07 9:04
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

I can't wait for Harry's turn! Please update QUICKLY!

Author's Response: Wow, nice to see you eager for the new chappie! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 04/21/07 7:51
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

AAAAAHHAHAHHAAHA! That was a scream and a laff combined because Voldemort in a bright pink bikini posing as a supamodel would scare the living crap outta me.

Author's Response: Hehehe! I don't know why most people seem afraid of seeing Voldemort like that...I wud luv to do that!!!!! Thanks for reviewing, again! =D

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 04/21/07 7:45
Chapter: Hermione Granger

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I like the wolf-whistle part!

Author's Response: Yay! One of my frenz loved it, too. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 04/21/07 7:12
Chapter: Hermione Granger

:scribble scribble: I like this story. Very funny and imaginative. And I liked the part when Harry hit Ron. Boys always seem to do that to eachother. Good story!

Author's Response: Hmm...that's rite, boys do seem to do that a lot! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 04/21/07 6:44
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

"...shrieked like they had seen a, ghosts are common in Hogwarts, so let's say they had seen Voldemort. In a bikini. Bright pink. Posing like a supermodel. Oh well."

Author's Response: That's right...EEEW!!! lol..thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pick Up A Potter
Date: 04/21/07 5:09
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

cant wait for harry to speak to them!

Author's Response: That's the next chapter! I'll try to do the Harry part as soon as possible because all are waiting eagerly for it I guess. Thanks a lot for reviewing!

Reviewer: Karma_k2
Date: 04/21/07 3:01
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Gotta tell ya - I seriously laughed when Prongs called Ron "my dear"!

Author's Response: laughed at that?? Well, humour means different think to different people! I'm glad you reviewed, thanks a bunch!

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