Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 04/29/07 22:41
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

That was great. Can't wait for chapter three=Sammy

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks a lot. I'll upadte as soon as I can...

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 04/29/07 22:20
Chapter: Hermione Granger

Well written. I liked it but I did find one mistake.

How could they could concentrate on a book and that too on a Sunday morning?

As you've probably noticed, its the repitation of the word could.

Well I'm gonna go read( and review )the second chappie now=Sammy

Author's Response: Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I'll correct it. I'm glad you liked the chapter otherwise. Thanx for the review!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 04/29/07 18:57
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

aaaaa greart chappie update soon pleeeeeeease

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll update soon.

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 04/29/07 9:58
Chapter: Hermione Granger

Haha! I love when Sirius told Hermione that Ron fancies her! Great start!

Author's Response: Hmm that was quite naughty of Sirius, rite? lol I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 04/28/07 22:01
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

hahaha! 'a particularly foul blast-ended skrewt'! i loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 04/28/07 18:28
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Ooh, I like this fic. I'm adding it to my favourites, and I don't do that to many humour ones (they have to be funny, random and well-written) I just went to your authors page (not sure why) and found out that you don't ship Harry/Ginny. Therefore I'm almost assuming you won't give Harry relationship advice about that. Then again, I'm shipping Ginny/Neville in my story, and H/G is my OTP. Congrats on the funniness *gives spork*

Author's Response: I'm happy that you like my fic! I don't ship H-G but that doesn't mean I won't write about it in my fics! Ah..spoiler!!! It's just the fact that I dont like that pairing but I know they are destinied to be together so...I've sorta accpeted it. Thanks a lot for the review. You have an interesting pen name, by the way!

Reviewer: Misty Moon
Date: 04/28/07 8:52
Chapter: Hermione Granger

l love it!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: dancer4life
Date: 04/25/07 15:21
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

great story its really funny please update soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way! Thanks a lot for reivewing. I ll update ASAP.

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 04/25/07 14:50
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

This is a really interesting concept and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll update soon!

Reviewer: Kay Loves You All
Date: 04/24/07 21:05
Chapter: Ronald Weasley


Author's Response: *gulps* Okay, okay, take it easy...wait for mid May...

Reviewer: miss_prongs
Date: 04/24/07 16:18
Chapter: Ronald Weasley


Author's Response: Thank you for loving it!

Reviewer: miss_prongs
Date: 04/24/07 16:10
Chapter: Hermione Granger

That was soooo good! I luved it! I really liked how you added Padfoot making Moony shut up! Rofl... im a little confused though. the map, is it giving the advice, or are the people? like did they write it somehow? please email me the answer at thanks

Author's Response: Hehe! Thanks so much! Well I didn't give so much thought to who gives the advice, though I'd like you all to assume that there's just the map expressing the thoughts of the marauders. Ah, yeah. That's do i need to email u?? *mutters something about being lazy* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Katt_Jamie
Date: 04/23/07 23:18
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Ooohhhhhh.... The plot thickens!!!

Author's Response: So it does! Thank you for reviewing =D

Reviewer: Katt_Jamie
Date: 04/23/07 23:03
Chapter: Hermione Granger

w00t!! This is hilarious! how did you get this submitted? People won't accept me!!! TT-TT please give me advice!

Author's Response: Thanks you! Well this chapter was rejected the first time due to punctuation errors. So I got it beat read!! A fresh pair of eyes can do wonders, so I'd suggest you to get a nice beta reader. Wish you all the best with your fics!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 04/23/07 16:18
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Very very funny. Can't wait to see whta they say about Harry. Wish I knew what they would say about me. *sighs wistfully*

Author's Response: hehe. That would indeed be cool...but you can always hope for the best. Like I'm still waiting for my letter. I just know Hogwarts exists. It does. *runs away before u think she's nuts*

Reviewer: Forshadowing
Date: 04/23/07 13:53
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

This is really a clever Idea. keep it up

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks so much!

Reviewer: prongs_rides_again
Date: 04/23/07 12:21
Chapter: Hermione Granger

wthat on earth gave you this idea its great dont get me wrong its ingenious i just want to know how you got your inspiration!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm honoured!!! Well my random little brain just thought of how fun it would be if the marauders map would speak to other people like it spoke to snape. I decided to modify it a little, as you can see. The map doesn't insult people but advises them. Thanks a lot for the review, and stay tuned!

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 04/21/07 22:17
Chapter: Hermione Granger

So....What is she gonna do about Ron??
She just pretends it doesn't happen!
Now she knows he likes her!!!!!

Author's Response: Ekk! lol thanks for reviewing, bubble. Stay tuned for the next chappie!

Reviewer: MiMiMo0
Date: 04/21/07 21:33
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Can't wait to see what it says to Harry! Plz update soon!

Author's Response: Okay! Thanx for the review :)

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/21/07 20:24
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Ohhhhh, Ron is so cute in this chapter. The part about Sirius giving him relationship advice gave me that nice tingly, fuzzy feeling... you know the one I mean, the one you get from eating cats. (I'm sorry, that was out of order.)

Oh boy, that was superlatively adorable. I can't even describe how squeeful it made me feel. I mean, it was awesome enough having Ron and Hermione get together in such a sweet way, but then you throw in a sentence like: "let's say they had seen Voldemort. In a bikini. Bright pink. Posing like a supermodel." Wow, you're good.

Sirius is great in this chapter, by the way. Thought I should add in that bit. Wormtail... oh gosh, he's hopeless. "Oh yeah? We thought you were a particularly foul blast-ended skrewt,"

I can't wait to see the part with Harry! Keep writing!

Author's Response:
Yay! I'm gald you like Ron as I've made him. Cute n innocent. That's how I like him, too. Instead of eating lavender's face! gross *shivers*

Cool...I've always known that you like Voldy being made fun of, so yeah, It wasn't unexpected that you liked thta voldy-in-bikini bit!!!

Thanks a million for the gr8 reviews! My summer hols are coming up so you can expect more reviews

Author's Response: uh, I mean updates not reviews!

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