Date: 06/24/10 20:45
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

hey i really like this story! any chance you want to pick it up again and continue writing??

Date: 06/24/10 20:41
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

hey i really like this story! any chance you want to pick it up again and continue writing??

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 11/10/08 19:48
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

whoot nice fic :D

Author's Response: Thanks much. Sorry I wont be able to update anymore... these guys just dont accept *sighs*

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 04/02/08 16:47
Chapter: Hermione Granger

I loved this!! It's great how 'Padfoot' pointed out how Ron likes Hermione.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Glad you love it.

Reviewer: Danielle_Malfoy
Date: 03/01/08 11:09
Chapter: Ronald Weasley


BUT I thought you would have continued it and done Harry and etc

Author's Response: The story isn't over yet, dear...there are LOADS of chapters to come. Just waiting for MNFF to be well again and my exams to be over :)

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 02/10/08 20:26
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

This is absolutely amazing! However, the story will have to end after Harry's turn, so here are a few ideas.
1) They spell out names that are not their own, such as Malfoy, Snape, Crabbe, and Goyle
2)They discover some way to answer back to the Marauders
3)Some other student or a teacher finds the map and fugures out how to use it
4)Ron wants another go, so he tries but cannot remember the spell, so when attempting to say the spell he a) gets the trio sucked into the map or b) sucks the Marauders into the real world
5)Someone finds the map and tampers with it, trying to find out it's secrets, and it goes haywire, possible resulting in 4a or 4b the next time one of the Trio uses it

These are just some ideas on how you could continue the story after Harry's turn. Sorry that I'm such a control freak, and please beleive me when I tell you that I am not trying to take over your story. I do think that it is an excellent story so far and that it is really cool.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for showing so much interest in my fic! Of course I dont think you're being a control freak. Those ideas are truly marvellous! Here's a good news: I've got a truly fantastic beta reader right now, and she's helping me with the thrid chapter. As soon as the queue opens, I'll be submitting the chapter. I didnt say the fic would end after Harry is finsihed with the Map. After him, Dumbldore's gonna have a go. I'd planned Draco too, but I just couldnt think of any way he'd get hold of the map! Your idea about the trio doing the wring names is brilliant. I just want Draco to get the advices himself and react snobbishly as is his way...well, we'll see! Thanks loads for your review!

Reviewer: Siriusly Mr Black
Date: 12/01/07 13:00
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Please write the bit about harry! I was really disappointed when it just ended there! It was really good!

Author's Response: You can find the chapter here:

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 11/03/07 10:06
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Awesone!!! Simply amazing!! Extreamly funny like this part...A few people in the room smirked on seeing Ron and Hermione's latest happening, a few glanced away with an expression that said, "Well, all knew this was bound to happen", while a few others shrieked like they had seen a, ghosts are common in Hogwarts, so let's say they had seen Voldemort. In a bikini. Bright pink. Posing like a supermodel. Oh well. Actually, the latter group included just one girl, and that was Lavender Brown.
Ha that made me crack up!! Can't wait to read Harrys maybe ginny will even get to use the map as well...

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I haven't thought of writing about Ginny as yet...oh well. We'll see. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 11/01/07 17:05
Chapter: Ronald Weasley


Author's Response: I AM! IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT THERE ARE PUNCTUATION ERRORS IN MY FIC AND IT'S REJECTED 3 TIMES!!!!! (wait...maybe it IS my fault...) lol...thanks for showing this much energy, I hope my beta reader betas it fast!!!!! I'm sooooo pissed off now! It's almost 3 months since I updated! *sobs and jumps of a cliff*

Reviewer: KrumEvilPointyBeard
Date: 11/01/07 16:57
Chapter: Hermione Granger

HA HA AHAaahahahahahahabnahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm assuming my fic was funny, or perhaps you're just sugar high and decided to come here and make my page go weird!

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/17/07 19:20
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

this is turning interesting.

Author's Response: Oh, I know! ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/17/07 19:15
Chapter: Hermione Granger


Author's Response: THANK YOU!

Reviewer: pandora123
Date: 09/14/07 6:40
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

loved it, and I never realised how much of a lame o Wormtail was

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you did it now; I've hated Wormtail right from the beginning. Thanks for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: stag and lily
Date: 09/10/07 5:05
Chapter: Hermione Granger

hope you update soon! i want to know what they say to harry! please! ;)

Author's Response: I'll try to edit the chapter fast and submit it again (for the THIRD time!!!)...stay tuned. xox ~menka

Reviewer: LeeKitten
Date: 09/03/07 19:43
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

I hope that you update soon ! I want to see what they say to Harry

Author's Response: I'm sorry. There'll be no upadtes for a while. I had the whole chapter written but it was rejected because the moderator does not agree with the marauders' thinking capabilities and such in the map. so...I'll try to change the chapter and submit it again. Sorry.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/16/07 11:09
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

Advice is great, but I really canít see Lavender just waiting for him to finish. She would have been all over them trying to stop something from happening. Which one is Wormtail? Or is it really him? Guess Iíll have to wait and see. Looking forward to seeing what they say to Harry. See you there.

Author's Response: Hehe, I guess Lavender was just too shocked to do anything. She just saw it, dumbfounded, unable to believe that it was really happening. The last marauder to speak is Wormtail, though he doens't really speak anything cuz he's too dumb. I wish the 3rd chapter is validated soon, it's been in the queue for so long...

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/16/07 11:07
Chapter: Hermione Granger

Really funny and entertaining. I would like to have seen Harry do it first though. I know you are the author, so it happens in the order you want it to, but Harry is the owner, and it was made by his father, and godfather, and friend.
Canít wait to see what they tell Ron. See you there.

Author's Response: I didn't particularly give any importance to the order, it just happened the way it did. But I think Harry being the last person to get advice is nice. It's like, all the ordinary things happened first but the most special and important one happens in the end. Thank you, though, for expressing your views. :)

Reviewer: tonksnlupin
Date: 07/31/07 0:46
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

I love your way of speaking through the marauders to the trio. I cannot wait to see what James says to Harry!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Lily_Flower_Evans
Date: 07/20/07 19:13
Chapter: Ronald Weasley

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Jeez. It's July 20th. It's been months since you updated. I want to see what they will say to Harry. *sniffles*

Author's Response: The 3rd chapter is with my beta reader. Hopefully will get it soon.

Reviewer: princess_padfoot
Date: 07/16/07 22:12
Chapter: Hermione Granger

i really like this. its amazing and i love what the Marauders say.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like whatever I make the marauders say! lol !

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