Reviews For As You Sleep
Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 01/13/08 14:12
Chapter: As You Sleep

*wipes away tears* So...good...

Author's Response: Aw, there, there. *pats* :)

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/03/07 6:34
Chapter: As You Sleep

nooooooooo not another one, dont kill mione off i think u lot hate me as soon as i stop crying from one story i cry again nice story anyway

Author's Response: Aw lol, it really pained me to kill Hermione, too. She's one of my favorite characters. I appreciate the review! ~GG

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/02/07 19:20
Chapter: As You Sleep

nooooooooo not another one, dont kill mione off i think u lot hate me as soon as i stop crying from one story i cry again nice story anyway

Author's Response: Aww there, there, don't cry. :) Sorry for writing such a sad story but thank you ever so much for reading it. ~GG

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 11/28/07 17:56
Chapter: As You Sleep

I am so close to crying right now. This is no doubt one of the saddest stories I have ever read!

Author's Response: Goodness, I'm sorry! It is a sad story, isn't it? I think the very nature of love is often best expressed through its tragedy, though I hate to admit it. Thank you for the review dear. :) ~GG

Reviewer: Ashdyn Gets naked
Date: 07/16/07 18:08
Chapter: As You Sleep

Wow. Freakin tear no doubt! Its so horrible when things like this happen. It puts in perspective what u should do. Like i have always been one to assume people knew what they were to me. I never used to speak it until my cousin and my best friend died. He never told me how he felt in person.. And i never told him. I had to find out through a letter after he died. And god it sux so bad. I have learned to tell everyone exactly what they are to me. And this story was brill. Great job.

Author's Response: Aw, goodness! You really know from personal experience, don't you? I can imagine this story really hit home for you. I hope my story didn't make you cry too awfully much...*pets* I'm sorry about your friend and cousin. That's so awful. But at least something good came out of that horrible situation. *hugs* I really appreciate your review. XD ~GG

Reviewer: Moondanser83
Date: 06/28/07 2:32
Chapter: As You Sleep

**sob** Should have known better then to read this one at work after I read the sumary....

Author's Response: Aww MD! Hehe yeah you kinda walked into it after reading the summary :) Hope I didn't make you cry in front of anyone, lol. Thanks for reading! ~GG

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLove7
Date: 06/18/07 12:13
Chapter: As You Sleep

That was so bloody sad, and I LOVED it!
Even though I'm still a bit teary eyed, it was an awesome story. Siriusly brilliant!

Author's Response: Aw well thank you! I know it is a terribly sad story, but I'm still glad you like it. :) (sorry for making you teary though...*sniff*). I really appreciate your review, SIL! :D ~GG

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLove7
Date: 06/18/07 12:13
Chapter: As You Sleep

That was so bloody sad, and I LOVED it!
Even though I'm still a bit teary eyed, it was an awesome story. Siriusly brilliant!

Author's Response: It is sad, isn't it? I can't believe I wrote someting so sad. Thanks for the review! ~GG

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/18/07 17:16
Chapter: As You Sleep

Touching and sad. Well done

Author's Response: Thanks :)


Reviewer: elleve
Date: 03/19/07 14:03
Chapter: As You Sleep

My hands were trembling as I read this. It is beautiful, honestly. Most stories portray Ron as a good-for-nothing prat who always stuffs his mouth with food, but you showed him in a wonderful light - that he does have feelings, and that he is a person. I loved it, it is a beautifully written piece. =) Great job.

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I tend to write Ron like you do too, quite honestly, but I just know he's got a deeper side and that's what I was going for. I really appreciate the compliments, Elleve! ~GG

Reviewer: ILOVEHARRY92
Date: 03/18/07 8:09
Chapter: As You Sleep

Oh my gosh, that was amazing!! I was so sweet that it made me cry!! Love your work!

Author's Response: Aw thank you, dear. I know this story is really sad but it was just one of those stories I couldn't let go. Thanks so much. I'm really glad you like it. :) ~GG

Reviewer: omg i love sirius
Date: 01/27/07 11:51
Chapter: As You Sleep

meh.. i dunno, it was kind of missing something. And the pace was completely wrong... not fast enough in the battle scenes. I really liked the beginning and end but the bit in the middle was kind of rushed or something. it was alll pretty sad though espesh the second last paragraph ..

Author's Response: Battle scenes aren't really my thing, so I can see your point there. It's really hard not to "rush" anything when you're doing a one-shot, but for the purposes of the story I think it sufficed. Thanks for the constructive criticism.


Reviewer: kxlayton
Date: 01/23/07 1:56
Chapter: As You Sleep

This is so sad! I actually almost cried. I wonder if she did hear him. I hope so. Poor Ron!

You wrote this so beautifully. All of the raw emotion. You captured it all so well. I could see it all rolling in my head almost like a fim. You are brilliant.

You made me appreciate fanfiction. And you are the best! Its almost like I could reach out and touch you through your writing.

Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry you almost cried. But about Hermione hearing what Ron said, even though I like to let readers make up their own minds, I like to think that she did. ;-)

I'm so glad to hear that my work has made you appreciate fanfiction. Thanks so much for the compliments about my writing and this story. You sure know how to make me feel all warm and fuzzy.

xx GG

Reviewer: ravenclawhero
Date: 01/10/07 19:08
Chapter: As You Sleep

i am crying right now. *sniff* oh, god! sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry to m ake you cry! I know it's a sad story and it made me almost cry while I was writing it. I can't believe my brain thought up such an awfully sad story. I still hold hope they have a happy ending in Jo's book though. *crosses fingers* Thanks much for the review! ~GG

Reviewer: Padfoot708
Date: 01/03/07 0:57
Chapter: As You Sleep

omg i cried lol - that was sooo sad but yet so good, really hit home, im never gone leave anything too late now :(

Author's Response: Aww, sorry you cried. :/ But at least you learned something from it.... (trying to look at the positive side, lol). Thank you ever so much for the review, Padfoot! ~GG

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 12/30/06 23:32
Chapter: As You Sleep

You're right, that was really sad! Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! ~GG

Reviewer: krumseeker15
Date: 12/30/06 23:29
Chapter: As You Sleep have no idea how hard im bawling now...its so sad yet gr8 @ the same time!wow!

Author's Response: aww, no crying allowed, then you'll make me cry! lol. thanks for the review. :) ~GG

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 12/30/06 21:17
Chapter: As You Sleep

wow -really good

Author's Response: Thank you! :D ~GG

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 12/30/06 19:59
Chapter: As You Sleep

beautifully written, but incredibly so like reall life.

Author's Response: Thank you, and yes I know how sad it is....I even made myself cry a few times while writing it! That's pretty pitiful. But anyways, thanks so much for reviewing! ~GG

Reviewer: Dee Dee
Date: 12/30/06 17:44
Chapter: As You Sleep

:'( *cries* that was so sad!! poor ron! *sob* oh i hate filch so much!! *angry face*

i think it must be something about this word but you mispelled closest again lol. this time though u missed the second s... Hermione fell asleep first on the bed closet to the window.

great story, even though it was really sad! *cries*

Dee Dee xx

Author's Response: Haha omg that's the worst word ever. I think I keep mispelling it because MS Word spell check doesn't catch it, since every time I do type it wrong it actually turns into another word. sheesh. anyways, thanks for reviewing. you're a tough one to brave this sad story. sorry to make you cry! :/ ~GG

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