Reviews For Porcelain Doll
Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 05/23/07 7:35
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

I read this before, but i loved it, so i had to read it again. i dont know if i reviewed last time...
The feelings conveyed in this are really powerful and it looks like you've got the mind set of a girl suffering annorexia very accurate.
Also, 'The road to perfection is too rough to attain and porcelain dolls break from the pressure of it' That is so beautiful. iIwas wondering if you made that up yourself or if it came from somewhere else?
emma x x x

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for the lovely review. :) Actually, I made that up myself. It was probably one of those ultra-rare moments of blissful muse. ^_^ It could also be because I knew what I was talking about when I wrote this. Again, thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it. :) -Debbie

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 05/15/07 15:55
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

Wow powerful stuff, and I didnt cry!lol. You portray the problem many girls have with frightening accuracy. Another fab story!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 12/23/06 2:02
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

Oooh nice fic :)

Sad fic, but it ends happily, so that's great :)

Very good imagery, and you did a wonderful work with the emotions, especially Draco's.


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Chris. :) -Debbie

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 12/22/06 18:35
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

I think you have truly caught the feelings and insecurity of someone who suffers from an eating disorder. I love how you had Draco come and point out what she was doing to herself, and how he liked girls with "more flesh". You did a wonderful job! Cyns

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Cyns. =D -Debbie

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 12/22/06 11:48
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

Wow. Very well done, it's nice to hear from the more minor characters sometimes. I really enjoyed the voice you gave Pansy. Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Yes, it's nice to give the minor characters some love every now and then. Thanks so much for reading! :) -Debbie

Reviewer: POTCgirl1337
Date: 12/22/06 9:38
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

oh my god...! That story was written so emotionally well! I couldn't tear myself away, and right now, my mom is yelling at me for the hundreth time to get downstairs and have breaksfast. I really loved it though, you're quite talented. As the reader you feel like you really know what she's going through and you can fell all the emotions along with her. Also, marks up for creativity! Please write some more!

Author's Response: Thank you reading and reviewing! =) -Debbie

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 12/22/06 8:57
Chapter: Porcelain Doll

This one was spot on. As someone who has walked that desolate road I could recognize the feelings and descriptions vividly. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) -Debbie

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