Reviewer: charlie_the_moose
Date: 06/28/07 12:08
Chapter: "I Bask" and "One More"

I like these poems - and the conflicting emotions that I glean from them.
Charlie ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. My real life issues help me to write poetry...I just wish all of it could pertain to HP so I could get them up here!

Reviewer: weasly_witch
Date: 02/06/07 12:43
Chapter: "I Bask" and "One More"

wow i love the style of your writing!

Author's Response: thank you! how I love compliment showers! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 01/21/07 21:00
Chapter: "I Bask" and "One More"

Wow you enwrapped me in your excellent
poetry.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 12/20/06 18:10
Chapter: "I Bask" and "One More"

Alright - I understand the second poem is a sonnet, but what is the first (except for the couplets)? It must be free verse. :)

I love, love love this:

I do not know, so do not ask,
in my ignorance, my sweet, blissful ignorance,
I bask.


Because it's places after the repition of similar couplets, it has so much effect. And your sonnet really conveys the desperation of the writer. The measurements are great too, because you use so many - cup, inch, pinch.

A nitpick: 'tkaing' should be 'taking.' ;)

Very well written.

-Prof Jenn


Author's Response: Well...it was kind of a sonnet, with a couplet in between the quatrains. *rolls eyes* oh, Jenn. The ever perfectionistic professor. ^-^

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Green Knight Rises by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
In Creevey Wizard Comics, the Green Knight aids those in need under the cloak...
Friends and Foes by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
It took Harry and his friends years to discover who killed Colin Creevey. Ginny...
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
FEATURED
Wild Card by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
It was going to happen eventually: Oliver Wood had to retire. But when the decision...
Half-life by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Neville has the rest of his life ahead of him, but all he can do is look back...
Skinny Love by xxbabewithbrainsxx 6th-7th Years
“I’ve always been chubby. Admit it.” “You’ve never been skinny...
Tigerlily by Maple_and_PheonixFeather 3rd-5th Years
You promised yourself you'd never hurt her, but there are times when you wonder...
Astriferous by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Merope Gaunt has never been celestial.Nominated for a 2014 QSQ - Best Dark/Angst. Nominated...
CATEGORIES