I love the ending, the "million dollar question" about Twinkle's hair.
Why didn't you mention the color of Ron's bean? I'd have helped him figure it out!
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I love it! Very nicely written.
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Oh man, Fred is in for it now!
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::: tears in eyes::: This was great! Thanks for the laugh!
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