Yoou no the title is called Please, Please Forgive me. that is a line from an evanescence song, is tht where the title is from? Awesome Story
i don't understand what is going on but noice mate.
I'm a major H/Hr shipper, so major it's kind of scary, and let me tell you, there are some good H/Hr fanfics on here, but this one has to be my second favorite (second favorite simply because it's not finished and I'm still a little confused, but you'll clear that up).
The emotions are awesome, I applaud you.
Sandie =3 xD
well, i have always thought hermione was a little.. well. fragile.
somehow when i am writing fanfiction, (which my friends actually read like there's no tomorrow) i usually use hermione for the emotional ones.
i think it's mostly because to me she's really deep and real.
i absolutly loooved the opening of this soon to be great story.
wow this is very powerful and descriptive! Very emotional! LOVE IT!
Cant wait for the rest. Lots of love Kristina
Hermione is always a great character for feelings and emotions!
I think i'll like your story. It's a good opening. And i hope you won't disappoint us. Tell me if you already update this story, will you?
that was very good. please post another chapter
woah woah woah... Cho and Harry!? and then (though accidently) Hermoine kills her!? Ok yeah i just know this is going to be a wonderful fic cuz thats the only way you can get them together after this. You're either a brilliant writer or you've got some nerve. Either way I like it ! :)
Wow.. A very interesting first chapter.. I really liked it. I can't wait to read more. This story is going on my favorites so I can track it.
omg i was so confused then lol
Amazing! Keep it coming!
that is sooooooo good. keep on writing
hmmm, i like the way the plot is going so far. keep writing!
Humble Me...? is on Feels Like Home... I'm not exactly clear on what you're asking... and can't wait for an update!
Very intriguing! I can't wait for the update.
Have you, perchance, heard "Humble Me" by Norah Jones? Just checking. And please update soon, you terrible cliff-creating hag! just kidding of course...
Author's Response: Depents on what Album this song is though. I try to update soon the only reason the next chapter isn't up yet is there are still errors in my next chapter. Thanks for your review :)
its confusing, but in a good kind of way. the only problem is that now i have to wait (and i am not really good at that) for the second chapter.