Reviews For Moving On...
Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/11/07 10:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sweet and touching.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 01/01/07 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness!!!!!!!(endless exclamations points)!!!!!!! That was so great! So cute. I love it! It's adorable, yet sad and touching. You wrote it absolutely wonderfully! Wow! Do you have anything else I can read. Lol, I'm definitely gonna check.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 12/30/06 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is so sad! But if there was no hope of him waking up, wouldn't they just have let him die? Anyway, great story.

Reviewer: hermy_luvs_ron
Date: 12/30/06 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, that was absolutely adorable! i loved it. you should continue it.

Reviewer: hermy_luvs_ron
Date: 12/30/06 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, that was absolutely adorable! i loved it. you should continue it.

Reviewer: Aguamenti
Date: 12/30/06 10:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

wait im confused is he in a coma?

Reviewer: mugglemommy
Date: 12/30/06 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love the end!

Reviewer: magical_hannah
Date: 12/30/06 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

GREAT STORY!

a little confusing...because i am slow-

but when it says "Hermione?" is that her day dreaming, or is that him finally waking her up?

IF he is awake after soo long-
please write what happens next lol

again> great story. brilliant!

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