Reviewer: happybandit12
Date: 05/08/07 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

"contraceptive potion" unromantic. needs more flowery language.

Author's Response: does "condom" sound romantic to you? just trying to make it sound somewhat real, not "flowery."

Reviewer: dramaqueen88
Date: 04/12/07 18:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

Awe...so cute! Update soon!

Author's Response: alright, once again my second chapter has been shot down... and being a full time dad doesnt come w/ a lunch break... but i will try to update soon... as long as my chapters arent shot down... i need a new computer soon so that's not helping... tty'alllater...

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 04/06/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

I really like it so far, I will stay tuned to learn how the story unfolds.

Reviewer: ioname2you
Date: 03/29/07 3:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

i like the beggining and hope you carry on please update soon

Reviewer: Littleman85
Date: 02/18/07 12:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

Not to be an annoyance, but it's been over a month since I reviewed this story. When will the update be posted?
Still love the story by the way.


Author's Response: ok, i'm sooooo sorry about all of the no showness... i actually just started a new job (now i have two). but i just turned in a new chapter to be reviewed. so hopefully it will be up soon!!! ,V..

Reviewer: pinkpanther7892
Date: 02/04/07 20:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

very cute.... its just not very clear where u r going right now with this....

Author's Response: thanks. You will see where it's going in the next chapter... i promise... *evil grin*

Reviewer: Bloody Draco
Date: 01/26/07 14:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

grat, fantastic, speachless...

Author's Response: wow, that is a great review! hopefully you think the same about the next chapter!

Reviewer: staples
Date: 01/20/07 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

very cool I liked it I hope that chapter 2 is as good hopefully even better, I will keep checkin until it is in

Author's Response: ok, i am sooooooooo almost done w/ the second chapter. i have to slow down a lot because i'm looking for a new place to live and i have two jobs... so yeah thanks for the reviews!!!

Reviewer: Littleman85
Date: 12/30/06 20:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Night at the Burrow

This is pretty good for a first Chapter. I hope you keep writing it.

Author's Response: thanks that means a lot to me. U get the first review award yay!!! well, i am actually half way through the second chapter so it should be updated soon!

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