I love witing from Ginny's POV. (I wrote one myself, its here somewhere)...anyway you did a great job with her. I think she would write something like that if she was ever a poet :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the complement!
Well done. Your poem was controlled but full of passion. It rhymed well too. The subject was serious and the twist at the end was heart wrenching. I think this poem is going to haunt me. I hope Ginny doesn't get paralyzed in the last book. One thing I found confusing was the line that says "I sit down with friends." If Ginny is paralyzed how can she do this? Shouldn't it run something like "I sit [here?] with friends"? Nevertheless the poem is excellent.
Author's Response: Thanks for catching that problem, I'll go fix i right now! Thanks!