Reviews For The Sky Lament
Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 12/25/06 14:31
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Uh...yeah...erm...what's hotel california? I like randomness, so that's ok. I can't wait 4 the Ron part of your...series thingy to come out!! I will keep checking until it does! And if I don't catch it in time, you can contact me and yell at me or something...anyway...have you ever heard of Naruto? Seen/read it? It's awesome manga, but I don't know if u like that kind of thing...yeah, that was random...have you ever thought of writing prose? Or are you just a poetry person? Personally, I can do both. Prose comes more easily to me, though. Anyway, just wondering if you did that sort of thing...Good luck with your next poem, and be sure to tell me when it comes out!!
-J.K. (No, i'm not just kidding! My initials strike again!)

Author's Response: song from the 1970's *shrug*...its my mom's fault i swear:-(.....dont worry ill make sure to yell :-P.....yea, actually, ive heard of naruto, but ive never seen or read it..isn't it that one with that boy and i think..white hair?....i remember back when i was like 7-9 years old i loved anime and watched dragonballz and sailor moon and pokemon *daydeam*..but now i think i could have spent all of those years being interested in harry potter-(...didnt start with it till mid-2005....anyway i don't really challenge what i can and can't write, usually my poetry takes its form as prose or with a thyme scheme and all of that stuff...i really don't get into details of the types of poetry..i.they'e confusing ;-P...i just write what comes to mind...anyway thanks for the good luck and im sure it will be out...err...eventually! S.K.

Author's Response: rhym scheme**....stupid typos..

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 12/25/06 9:09
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Yay! Sixth review! *grins sheepishly* So, yet ANOTHER excellent poem from my favorite poet! (well...maybe second favorite...I kinda like the poems written by this Dragon_Warrior person ;-D) Just when I thought you couldn't get any better...something like this shows up! Way to go, this one is by far the best! The rhyming went wonderfully with the actual writing, and the music part in the beginning? Fabulous, dahling, simply fabulous! More poems! I want more poems! THE GREAT DRAGON DEMANDS MORE POETRY FROM LADY MAGICIAN!! THIS INSTANT!!!!! You must keep it up.

Happy Holidays,
J.K.

Author's Response: i like that Dragon_Warrior girl, too..shes really good!....anyway u know I couldn't wait for ur review and im happy u finally read my poem!...hmphf..i had to tell u! (joking)...anyway, u know im really happy that u think it's great, and we all know by my huge mouth that one from Ron will come out.....sometime.......Thanks! S.K. P.S...i just listened to hotel california (i know its old, but i heard it once from this girl and i liked it so i checked it out)......it's great!...that was random i know ;-)

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 12/19/06 19:00
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Whoops...didn't even LOOK at the chapter title.... Great job with Hermione, anyway, something about it just screamed her name. Great job!

Author's Response: I know what you mean! Originally, this wasn't meant for my HP poetry, but then i realized that it was perfect for hermione! Anyway from ur other review...im happy that u feel i 'bless u with my poetry'..but im only 12!!..im sure people on this site can do alot better than me...WITH THE PROPER INSPIRATION! its all about it, guys...anyway im boring you now :-).....as always, I wish to please you!.XOXOXO thanks!

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 12/19/06 18:55
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Oh, how beautiful. I don't know if it was supposed to be, but the second I started reading this I thought, "Hermione". Please tell me if I'm wrong.

Another awesome poem! Wow...you bless us all with your poetry.

~Charlotte

Author's Response: Charlotte...nice name :-)...anyway i saw ur other review and saw that u realized it was hermione lol...,bur I HEART REASONDING TO UR REVIEWS!!....im gonna go answer the other one now ;-)

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 12/19/06 17:21
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

WEEEE! OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! I LIKE IT BETTER THAN ANYTHING YOU HAVE WRITTEN! THIS IS 1,000 TIMES BETTER THAN THE POEM IM GONNA POST ON HERE WHEN ITS DONE! GREAT AWESOMELY DELICIOUS JOB!

Author's Response: THANKS MUCH!!! UR SO HYPER!!!....CAPSLOCKOFHYPERNESSWOOT!!!.......oh, i dunno..u might make a better poem than me...might:-P.....no but seriously, as i say..it's all inspiration..u can't force yourself to write something good..just let it flow...anyway im of course happy like it and im happy im getting better! HAPPY HOLIDAYS! XOXOXO!!..p.s...i hope ur new chappie comes out already!...or maybe it is..i havent checked :-P

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 12/19/06 13:58
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Oh. My. *insert naughty word here*. God. are you POSITIVE you're only 13? because, and this is no offense to you, most of the 13 yearolds I know...well, they have about the literacy rate of Crabbe and Goyle, and they act like Malfoy. and that's putting it mildly. Seriously, Sarah! you are brilliant! I think this is my favorite one... I'll be nice and not ask a bazillion questions like Rania did...teehee. sideways 8 out of 10! *I'm sorry. couldn't resits the mugglecast reference...* Yay!

Author's Response: Umm..yea...im almost 13 not yet :-P....i know what u mean about the 13 year old thing...my classroom is chock full of them ,after all!!! Deary, it's all inspiration. I'm sure you could do something better with the proper insipration.......anyway i really don't mind the questions much! lol....ONLY 2 MORE DAYSOF SCHOOL FOR ME!! huzzah......long time since i talked w/ u, juli, by the way :-)...HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 12/19/06 11:45
Chapter: Hermione's Lament

Whooosssshhhhhhhh! Another slam dunk! Sarah you have such an amazing way with words!!! The way you manage to express emotions honestly baffles me! I want to be able to write some thing like that!!! But the poem left me wanting more! What is the deal with Hermione? Where is she? Is this during the war? What time frame are we talkin' about here! And the song! What song? Is it a song inside her? Or is it like the lament of the Phenoix? Is this how Hermione felt after Dumbledore died? Ahhhh so many questions!!! This was definately a great gift for the holidays! Oh and I'm so sorry that you miss home so much (but I totally understand!) Don't forget to still get out there and enjoy life! Or sit at home and write the next poem! Those are you're two options! No mopping! You are much too talented and special to waste that kind of time! And yes, I am SO totally the first reviewer (boo yah!!!) Happy Eid back to you and I hope you keep writing during the holidays!

Author's Response: darn it Rania I didn't know people could ask that many questions at once! Here we go: 1)She's somewhere..u think...anywhere in europe that's the farthest away from the wizarding world. 2)Yes, it is 3) We're post-HBP, after "out of the blue' takes place. 4)The song is basically inside of her. To me, the song is a metaphor for all good things. For instance, when the song couldn't play, she wouldn't have been able to make a patronus. Bu when it did, it's like her spirit was reborn with 'the magic' of hope...i know..so poetic :-) Yea, it is sort of a phoenix lament... 5) Yes it is after her died...... ...............Anymore questions? Thanks and as always I'm so happy tou liked it! I won't mope anymore; I've got the holiday spirit in me..."REST YE MERRY HIPPOGRIFFS!".....u always make my day, and alwasy make me happy...even when my teachers are trying to jame every quiz/test/project possible into today, tomorrow, thursday, and friday :-).......JEESH IM HAPPY UR FIRST AND IM HAPPY UR SIGNING IN AGAIN :-)!!!!!!..i thought it would be heather..again!!......I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT EID AND NEW YEAR RANIA! WEVE BEEN FRIENDS FOR A YEAR AND SOME!!!!!.....lol i answered ur comment in order of questions so don't get confused :-D....YOU DA MAN!!! ;-)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Crofter and The Snake by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
During the perilous school year of 1997-1998, when Muggleborns are on the run...
Lily and Alice by Wenlock 3rd-5th Years
Alice defied the odds when she became the first woman Auror in the 20th century.Lily...
Time, Space, and Blunt Force Trauma by teh tarik 3rd-5th Years
On the very last day of his life, Sirius Black was bored. Bored, bored, bored.
FEATURED
My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg Professors
Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts...
His and Hers by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
In a perfect world, Neville and Hannah's wedding would go off without a hitch...
All This Waiting For The Sky To Fall by Dawnie 1st-2nd Years
They found her body - broken, bleeding, face filled with signs of pain and fear...
Sanguini, the Vampire by teh tarik 6th-7th Years
Vampirism is the persistence and the perpetuity of the body, a madness of the...
Lost and Found by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
When Tracey Davis's financial security was a casualty of war, her family is...
CATEGORIES