Reviews For Salvation
Reviewer: hp4_sauce
Date: 01/11/07 23:46
Chapter: Reparations

Excellent. Enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: 365 letters_ryan gosling 20
Date: 01/05/07 15:51
Chapter: Reparations

Great once again...Keep writing!


Author's Response: Thanks 365 LRG, it's always a challenge to wrap everthing up in the end. I appreciate the encouragement! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: 365 letters_ryan gosling 20
Date: 01/05/07 15:50
Chapter: Preparations

I don't know why no one's reviewing this story...I really like it! Keep up the great work!!!!!

Author's Response: Hmm, I hope that the lack of reviews isn't a bad sign! lol Thanks for leaving me a couple! Glad you liked it! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 01/05/07 12:34
Chapter: Reparations

Awww... that was cute, and sad, but then happy and good. Yay!!

Author's Response: Awww... Thanks KneazleWeazl! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 12/30/06 14:24
Chapter: Declarations

Oh. But Ginny said no. I'm confused - why?

Author's Response: Dum-da-dummm.... She said no? I'd take it that way if I was Harry. It will all make sense in the end. (2 more chapters to go!) Thanks DFTn's! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 12/30/06 9:03
Chapter: Declarations

Very good! There's more, right? I think that you're flashback needs to be entirely in italics, but I'm not sure... Most of the time that's how you do it, but I don't know about this instance... Very good job! Any chance of an update soon?
=) RP

Author's Response: More is on the way. The story is finished, just waiting for validation. I'm sorry if it was a bit confusing during the flashback. As a general rule, flashbacks of any length are seperated slightly from the rest of the body of text. Italizing works great on smaller scenes, but after a while it becomes difficult to read. I'm so glad you enjoyed this first chapter. Thanks, RupertsPheonix! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 12/29/06 23:57
Chapter: Declarations

oh, i hope this isn't done!

Author's Response: No, there are three chapters in all. The story is completed and in the queue. Thanks for reading, ~Patrony :)

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