Reviews For If
Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 05/07/07 19:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Clever! I have to admit to have never read the other If but this If was fantastic! I like the "changing repetition"- "I wouldn't be I/ You wouldn't be you/ We wouldn't be we" It adds a lot fo the poem's general rythym. Some of the rhyming was off and that threw off the general rhythm a lot, but other than that, I had a lot of fun reading it! This definitely deserved an honorable mention- or higher!
~Allie of the Gryffindor Review Crew

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved e.e. cumming's original poem, and it shouted for me to parody it. I know I need to revise the rhyme; it's my weakest point in writing poetry. Thanks again for the review. ~ Teresa

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/14/07 9:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow - I never thought of Harry and Ginny's relationship that way! Very interesting. *reads again*

I know you based this off of e.e. cummings, but I still think you did amazingly well. a) You had to rhyme. I cannot rhyme to save my life. b) You kept the rhythm strong. (Okay, that made no sense.) c) You brought a powerful image/feeling/etc. to the reader's mind, i.e. me. So great job!

~Kate

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to make it sound as close to e.e. cumming's poem as I could. Also, your poetry is amazing. I have read it so many times. ~ Teresa

Reviewer: the_evenstar
Date: 12/19/06 11:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a wonderful job! I really loved this poem. e.e.cummings is amazing, and you picked the perfect poem to parallel! Great job, and congratulations for the honourable mention - you truly deserve it. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't know I had placed until I read this review. You have made my day!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 12/18/06 12:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

wise--yeah, that is my word to descirbe that

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: alicepotter
Date: 12/18/06 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it!
Well written!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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