Reviews For Goodbye
Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 01/03/07 12:13
Chapter: Goodbye

:-)...Very Harry. I can see him writingsomething like this. I love it :-)

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 12/19/06 13:30
Chapter: Goodbye

Interesting poem.
I don't understand this line, though:
Goodbye sorrow,
That I will never have.

And in this line I think you should use liked instead of like:
Goodbye Dursleys,
Though I never even like you

And in both the part about Ron and the one about Hermione you used a variation of the word DEAR. I would change one of them to something else.

These are just suggestions.

I really do like what you are trying to write and the emotions you are trying to show.

Reviewer: DarkWind
Date: 12/19/06 5:42
Chapter: Goodbye

Wonderful! Poingant and emotional...very well written.

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