*sniffle* that almost made me cry! so sweet!!!
I love it!!!! It was so sad, but yet so peaceful. I think you are a terrific writer!!!
This was a very good fic! When does it take place?
I loved the relationship you forged between Ginny and Harry. I can see this relationship really taking place in real life (or in the books, shall we say..). The emotions you conveyed in this fic were absolutely wonderful. Not the emotions themselves, of course, but the way you conveyed them. First, it was fear at the thought that Ginny may never wake up, then it was anger at all of those who seemed to give up hope...oh, I can't list every one.
The clock effect really adds to the story. =) You just wait, and wait for it to happen by counting the 'dongs'. It's very good. =)
I love the way you write, dear, and I will definately read more of your fics in the future.
Wow, you're wonderful. This is you're second fic that I've read, and it was really beautiful. It's so sad that Harry won't get this in the Seventh Soul (refer to my other review).
As you can deduce by reading my penname, I'm an ardent Harry/Ginny shipper. You've done a lot of justice to the ship, in this fic. It's a wonder what the Almighty can do sometimes' isn't it? You should just leave everything to him (Actually, I'm looking at his photo now, and I think he's smirking at me).
Author's Response: Heehee. I'm glad you liked it so much! This is probably one of my favorite fics that I've written. Lurve H/G... :P Thanks for the review!!!
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oooh! i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
AWWWWW. It's so sweet. Lurve it!
Author's Response: Glad you lurve it! :D I luuurve your penname, too! Thanks for the review!!!
A really sweet feel good fanfic. Top marks for grammar and spelling.
Author's Response: Woo! Top marks! *does a little victory dance* Thanks, King Bob! (er... if you are King Bob. If you're not, send him my compliments and an e-cookie! ;) ) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!!!
Wow, that was great. You put a lot of emotion in it (well, mainly sadness, but at the end it was very sweet and happy).
Just one thing. When Ginny says "I old you I'd get you under the mistletoe sooner or later" I think 'old' is 'told'. But that was the only spelling/grammar mistake that I found, so overall, wonderful job!
This was such a sweet story. I could totally see how much Harry loved Ginny. He stayed by her side for months...wow. I can see him doing that...especially because he loves her so much. I just think it is ironic that this (Ginny's 'accident') happened during a Quidditch game, as both Harry and Ginny love Quidditch...
My favorite scene/part/line/whatever:
Ginny... I know you’re going... that I’ll probably never hear your sweet voice again... but thank you for the time we had. I love you, and I – I’ll miss you, Ginny...
Beautifully written. You showed Harry's thoughts wonderfully...and they were so sad, too! *tear*
Okay, sorry to get a weepy on you...great fic, really, is what I'm trying to say...
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: All my fics seem to be sad. I'm thinking of trying my hand at a humor story, just so it can be something that won't make people cry all over it. :) And I know about the old/told thing, several people have pointed it out already... I just keep forgetting to change it. Oh, well. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! I really like your poems and stories, too, so it's great to have you say you like mine! :D Yay! Thank you for the review!!!
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This is soooo good! Thank you for this story.
Author's Response: You're welcome! ;) It was my pleasure. Thank you for the review!!!
That was very very well written. I loved the bit at the end with the clock chiming and her waking up as Christmas morning dawned. One tiny thing is that Ginny's eyes are brown, not blue, but compared to the brilliant writing that seems slightly insignificant... You said you wrote quite weepy stories normally - I might have a look at them. I've written some pretty sad H/G stuff, too. Merry Christmas! xx
Author's Response: Oops, they are blue, aren't they? I wasn't sure, so of course I chose the wrong color. Oh well. This was actually my very first completely H/G story (you might have noticed I barely had anything about any other characters), but all my non-poems are sad. I don't know why my writing's so depressing... my personality is very funny, but I somehow manage to write the exact opposite! Strange... :S Anyways, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! Merry Christmas to you, too! :)
“I old you I’d get you under the mistletoe sooner or later. This is the only mistake that I saw in this fic. It should be Told, not old. LOL.
I loved this. I seriously almost cried. :) I love the emotions and the romance that you portrayed between Harry and Ginny, and the little hint of mistletoe as the reminder of their love, I guess you could say. I loved this fic, and your writing. Great plot! I'll bet you'll win!
Author's Response: Oops. lol Picky, picky! Thank you for pointing out the ONE FLAW in the entire story! ;) Well, anyway, I'm glad you liked it (even tho I did make you [almost] cry)! Thanks for the review, I hope I do win, I don't have sky-high hopes, but that would be nice. I'm glad you like my writing; I do too! lol Thanks again for the review!!
I love it! Just love it!!!!! I didn't cry for once, but it's really sweet! Good job!MJ
Author's Response: Good, glad you didn't cry! My goal in life isn't to make my readers sobby and depressed, ya know. ;) I'm happy you liked it, MJ! Thanks for the review!!!
Beautiful, touching story.
I liked it very much. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!!! :)
I loved it!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, first reviewer! You win a star! *gringrin* I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the review, Peppermint!!! :P