Love the way this is written. The unspoken written word, beautiful
that was so cutee!
i loved the point of view it was written in.
Could this format be any harder to read?
Amazing1 Great! Tremendous! Encore!
Good. I enjoyed the originality. Many other R/Hr stories have the same conflict and the same result. Well done to you for changing things up a bit.
this was unique (in the way it was written) but i liked it alot. great job!
I like it, very sweet and touching...
this really is quite good. at first i wasnt sure about the 'you's but i think you pulled it off. i like how the connection is more subtle than it is undying, uncontrollable passion. its a nice change in the somewhat monotonous plot line of many one shots.
ohhh! cute! I liked this very much!