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Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 7:24 · For: P.S. I Love You
Please write a sequal


Name: RupertsPheonix (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 6:46 · For: P.S. I Love You
Ooh, nice cliff-hanger! First chapter was quite good. Any chance of a quick update when the mods get back? =) --RP


Name: Linda_Carrig (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 6:30 · For: P.S. I Love You
I really hope he invites her in! Good first chapter.


Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 1:07 · For: P.S. I Love You
A nice start. It's a bit rough around the edges in places. The transitions between Harry and Ginny's pov are somewhat jarring. There are a few minor grammatical errors you might want to scan for-- example: Ginny had been there, standing next to Harry, daring not to look him in the eye. (might want to change it to 'not daring to look him...')

Nice job. Exciting to see a new story starting.

Pax.


Name: moody s friend (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 0:05 · For: P.S. I Love You
Very good start.I like reading your story.Keep writing.I am waiting for the next chapter.


Name: moody s friend (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 0:05 · For: P.S. I Love You
Very good start.I like reading your story.Keep writing.I am waiting for the next chapter.


Name: Hogwarts Alumni (Signed) · Date: 12/26/06 23:46 · For: P.S. I Love You
AHHHH!!!! MORE!!!!


Name: Margalot (Signed) · Date: 12/26/06 23:18 · For: P.S. I Love You
Ooohhh....Can't wait for the next installment!


Name: Ms_Wolfsbane (Signed) · Date: 12/26/06 19:37 · For: P.S. I Love You
So cool! Can't wait for the next chapter.

$~Miss Wolfsbane~$


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