Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/27/06 7:24
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

Please write a sequal

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 12/27/06 6:46
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

Ooh, nice cliff-hanger! First chapter was quite good. Any chance of a quick update when the mods get back? =) --RP

Reviewer: Linda_Carrig
Date: 12/27/06 6:30
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

I really hope he invites her in! Good first chapter.

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/27/06 1:07
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

A nice start. It's a bit rough around the edges in places. The transitions between Harry and Ginny's pov are somewhat jarring. There are a few minor grammatical errors you might want to scan for-- example: Ginny had been there, standing next to Harry, daring not to look him in the eye. (might want to change it to 'not daring to look him...')

Nice job. Exciting to see a new story starting.

Pax.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 12/27/06 0:05
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

Very good start.I like reading your story.Keep writing.I am waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 12/27/06 0:05
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

Very good start.I like reading your story.Keep writing.I am waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 12/26/06 23:46
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

AHHHH!!!! MORE!!!!

Reviewer: Margalot
Date: 12/26/06 23:18
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

Ooohhh....Can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Ms_Wolfsbane
Date: 12/26/06 19:37
Chapter: P.S. I Love You

So cool! Can't wait for the next chapter.

$~Miss Wolfsbane~$

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