Very interesting. Highly disturbing, but very good. I had a wonderful time reading and am svaing it to my favorites. Thanks for the laughs.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. My other story is rated PG-13. It's a romantic comedy and not quite as disturbing. That might be more to your taste. Glad you found the humor in this, though.
Fantastic, now wouldnt you say? But i favor less the pubes display. Anywho, your work is great, Snape had a truley awful date>:)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review in verse! R is not my preferred rating either. My stories are archived at Occlumency and I have fallen under their evil influence! This is pretty tame by their standards.
Great Scot! Blimey, that was imaginative...I loved it. Thank you for making me cry laugh and hurt from it all. T'was brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you, Orlaith, for being such a loyal reviewer!
That peom made me cry. Thank you!
Absolutely Beautiful...As ever, you've excelled! Well done!
Having a horrid day & needed a laugh, so decided to revisit your sublime offering. I think you succeeded in the challenge, and then some. Delightfully naughty rhymes...tender scene with the toy train...wicked fun with the hexes....Vocalion, you have mastered the greasy git; The Great Snapini is a hit!
Author's Response: Sorry to hear you're having a horrid day, but I'm glad you popped in to have another read. Thanks, Grainne!
Oh. My. God. That was HILARIOUS! EXCELLENT job with the rhymes! Some of the "unfinished" ones took me a few seconds to get, and then I realized why you left them...unfinished. Very clever, very witty, and very...disturbing. Keep up the good work in "Highly Improbable!"
Author's Response: Thank you, Jase! Several reviewers have found this little romp...disturbing. It was meant to be nothing more than pure silliness. This story was written in response to a writing challenge, and I doubt seriously that I will ever write another R-rated story again. I am rather shy, which explains the unfinished rhymes!
That was kinda weird, but I really enjoyed it!
Snape sure outfoxed Hermione! Hope that Clancy and he had a truly memorable evening. Thanks!
Clancy knows her man. Great tale and great writing.
Clancy and Snape are wonderfully matched. Love the part where Snape finds a kindred spirit in the young boy. Good job.
I thought that was quite a sweet thing of Snape to do and the poem was quite hillarious, I had a vivid picture of snape doing it, sorry about the prolonged review, but 10++
That was slightly disturbing, but it was very good none the less.
ur pretty good!! its a funny story. are you going to write more chaps or was that the end??
ur pretty good!! its a funny story. are you going to write more chaps or was that the end??
Very, very, funny, I have not yet read your story, but it is on my "fanfics I must read" list
Very, very, funny, I have not yet read your story, but it is on my "fanfics I must read" list
Author's Response: Thank you. The last chapter has been submitted and should be up today.
