Reviewer: Ewana
Date: 02/02/05 16:57
Chapter: Acting Up

Very interesting. Highly disturbing, but very good. I had a wonderful time reading and am svaing it to my favorites. Thanks for the laughs.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. My other story is rated PG-13. It's a romantic comedy and not quite as disturbing. That might be more to your taste. Glad you found the humor in this, though.

Reviewer: Seraphine
Date: 01/24/05 4:55
Chapter: Acting Up

Fantastic, now wouldnt you say? But i favor less the pubes display. Anywho, your work is great, Snape had a truley awful date>:)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review in verse! R is not my preferred rating either. My stories are archived at Occlumency and I have fallen under their evil influence! This is pretty tame by their standards.

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 01/21/05 13:08
Chapter: Acting Up

Great Scot! Blimey, that was imaginative...I loved it. Thank you for making me cry laugh and hurt from it all. T'was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you, Orlaith, for being such a loyal reviewer!

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 01/21/05 12:49
Chapter: Acting Out of Necessity

That peom made me cry. Thank you!

Reviewer: Orlaith
Date: 01/21/05 12:41
Chapter: Acting On Impulse

Absolutely Beautiful...As ever, you've excelled! Well done!

Reviewer: Grainne
Date: 01/18/05 12:52
Chapter: Acting Up

Having a horrid day & needed a laugh, so decided to revisit your sublime offering. I think you succeeded in the challenge, and then some. Delightfully naughty rhymes...tender scene with the toy train...wicked fun with the hexes....Vocalion, you have mastered the greasy git; The Great Snapini is a hit!

Author's Response: Sorry to hear you're having a horrid day, but I'm glad you popped in to have another read. Thanks, Grainne!

Reviewer: Krunt
Date: 12/18/04 14:56
Chapter: Acting Up

why is this r?

Reviewer: Jase
Date: 12/17/04 21:30
Chapter: Acting Up

Oh. My. God. That was HILARIOUS! EXCELLENT job with the rhymes! Some of the "unfinished" ones took me a few seconds to get, and then I realized why you left them...unfinished. Very clever, very witty, and very...disturbing. Keep up the good work in "Highly Improbable!"

Author's Response: Thank you, Jase! Several reviewers have found this little romp...disturbing. It was meant to be nothing more than pure silliness. This story was written in response to a writing challenge, and I doubt seriously that I will ever write another R-rated story again. I am rather shy, which explains the unfinished rhymes!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 12/16/04 7:12
Chapter: Acting Up

That was kinda weird, but I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 12/14/04 17:38
Chapter: Acting Up

Snape sure outfoxed Hermione! Hope that Clancy and he had a truly memorable evening. Thanks!

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 12/14/04 17:37
Chapter: Acting On Impulse

Clancy knows her man. Great tale and great writing.

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 12/14/04 17:36
Chapter: Acting Out of Necessity

Clancy and Snape are wonderfully matched. Love the part where Snape finds a kindred spirit in the young boy. Good job.

Reviewer: Lady Lupine
Date: 12/14/04 12:37
Chapter: Acting Out of Necessity

I thought that was quite a sweet thing of Snape to do and the poem was quite hillarious, I had a vivid picture of snape doing it, sorry about the prolonged review, but 10++

Reviewer: LavenderMoon
Date: 12/13/04 16:31
Chapter: Acting Up

That was slightly disturbing, but it was very good none the less.

Reviewer: zonkos
Date: 12/13/04 16:06
Chapter: Acting Up

ur pretty good!! its a funny story. are you going to write more chaps or was that the end??

Reviewer: zonkos
Date: 12/13/04 16:06
Chapter: Acting Up

ur pretty good!! its a funny story. are you going to write more chaps or was that the end??

Reviewer: Lady Lupine
Date: 12/13/04 10:48
Chapter: Acting On Impulse

Very, very, funny, I have not yet read your story, but it is on my "fanfics I must read" list

Reviewer: Lady Lupine
Date: 12/13/04 10:40
Chapter: Acting On Impulse

Very, very, funny, I have not yet read your story, but it is on my "fanfics I must read" list

Author's Response: Thank you. The last chapter has been submitted and should be up today.

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