awww sooo sweet.
short and sweet.
i loved how it was in the narrators pov as opposed to the cliché character telling their side of the story.
:D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. =] I had originally debated putting it in either character's POV, but I thought the whole 'pronoun' thing would work better. I'm glad you liked it!
Awww.. So cute!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! =]
Beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. :)
You should have turned this into a story! Its so good!
-crystal
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks! :D
you think its a lie when people write a story like this. its very very beautiful and very very breathtaking. thank you, i enjoyed it. (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It's no lie . . . that I can assure you. ;)
Your summary drew me in...and I'm glad it did! It was great. The lack of dialogue was brilliant, it's not easy to pull off. However, the really big paragraphs were a little hard on the eyes. Other than that, it was great. Thanks for this little one-shot =)
Author's Response: Ah. . . not the long paragraphs again . . . . *cowers from story* . . . . See, the thing is that I already broke many of the paragraphs down and that was very hard for me to do (due to my penchant for long, winding, never-stopping paragraphs :P) haha, didn't mean to rant . . . . Thanks for this wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Aw, this was beautiful. ♥ I like how no conversations were needed between the two to catch our intrests, to make us see and feel the love the held for each other, and i love how they both changed and yet were the same. They became one. Two halfs of a whole. And only together can they become indestructable. You put such feeling into the words. Keep it up, you did an excellent job. ♥
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Aw, this was beautiful. ♥ I like how no conversations were needed between the two to catch our intrests, to make us see and feel the love the held for each other, and i love how they both changed and yet were the same. They became one. Two halfs of a whole. And only together can they become indestructable. You put such feeling into the words. Keep it up, you did an excellent job. ♥
Author's Response: Thanks! Wow. That's some really awesome insight into the story. I'm glad you liked it and how I wrote everything without words. Thanks again for this absolutely wonderful review! :D
hard to think you can write such a good one shot without the use of speech in it. it was brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Everything I have posted right now actually has no dialogue at all . . . I'm glad you liked it. :D
wow
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it.
That ended too quickly. Oh, you are such a good writer, you portrayed their emotions and thoughts so clearly. I'm so glad Hermione and Draco ended up together! Thanks for the read. :]
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked the story and how I wrote their emotions. I was stuck between letting them stay apart or putting them back together and I went with letting them get back together since I wrote this for my friend's b-day and she would hate it if I kept them apart . . . Thanks again for the wonderful review! :D
wow you're a really good writer. I like your writing style... job well done...
lots of love tasnia
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. :) My writing style is well . . . what I like best about my writing (I'm not very solid on other aspects like dialogue and such). I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for the wonderful review. :D
Reall beautifully written story!!!!!! I'm not usually a draco/hermione fan but this was very well written, you had great descriptions and it was neat how you did a pair that isn't usually out together, good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm glad you read it, even though you really don't read d/hr much. :)
